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we lay in bed in a warm embrace,
while the day outside is cold, i see the beauty of your face, and i'm happy it's you i hold, i feel your goosebumps on my lips, as your skin i softly kiss, my tender hands caress your hips, as we lay in total bliss, it's the little things,the touch,the kiss, that i'll never forget to do, one moment of this i wouldn't miss, when i'm laying next to you.. |
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 really good write!
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really good write!
  
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 wow! had me in full melt by the last line
 very very nice!
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I would kill to have the kind of embrace again.
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I would kill to have the kind of embrace again.
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wow! had me in full melt by the last line
very very nice!
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Soft...sensual...to the point in very few verses.
Well done! 
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Ummmmmmm ah ya ummmmmmmm
excuse me 
(oh, good write by the way) 
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good write
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now if i only had someone to write them for..lol
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now if i only had someone to write them for..lol
 *sniff* aaaaaaaaaawwww... that breaks my heart
Sending cyber hugs
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now if i only had someone to write them for..lol
I know the feeling sweetie.
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