He is full of beer
His shirt is full of crumbs
She goes to her bed and in her head
She knows he is going to come

Dear old dad
He makes her sad
He is playing house with her
And you can bet
She will never forget
Everything he has done to her



He took away her virginity
He took away her pride
He played around with her purity
He hurt her all inside

It will hurt even more if she tells
They will think it's all a lie
And she knows real well that they will tell her that
He's not that kind of guy

So she sits on her bed
And says nothing
Her tears begin to fall
Please tell me why she has to cry
And be her daddys doll



Tammy




Thanks ((((Ron)))) for letting me remix!!

whoa man



is that....


saying...........


what I think it is?

I like it

Yea

It's about sexual abuse

then that was very very very veryyyyyyyyyyyyyy good

did you write it?

i was confused at the bottom

Well it was taken from my friends old journal

I read it and asked if I could do a write about it

whoa, thats deep. Real deep touching down on tha serious issues i c. Good write

My daughter's name is spelled this way, and I think that is the saddest poem and sickest thought out there. How anyone can do something like that is beyond comprehension. Gossip, great poem, but you understand my strong reaction to such a subject, especially with the name used.

I know this is just a write, but...

My reaction to this kind of thing is

You wrote well on a seriouse subject that sadly happens
in this sick world.

Writing on subjects such as these
Abuse of all kinds
Cutting
Mental illness
Etc

Always srtrikes somekind of emotion. It's diff. For diff people

I understand the sadness and the outrage that's why bringing these things to the forefront
In any way is important


Love to you all!!!

True, sadly true!

my friend had to go thru that for years, rips my heart a part.

Red, your friend has my prayers, I know it exists, but still I cannot fathom how that could be!

Prayers to your friend