Topic: when i'm holding you
bedlum1's photo
Thu 08/20/09 10:40 AM
i'd go through hell & heartbreak,
just to stand right next to you,
i'd brave the deepest waters,
to show you that i'm true.
i'd climb the highest mountain,
and at the i'd surely yell,
to tell the world i love you,
they dont like it..GO TO HELL!
you mean the very world to me,
i stand with open heart,
i feel like only half a man,
whenever we're apart,
you are always on my mind,
my love is oh so true,
all my worries disappear,
when i'm holdind you.
i'd drive the longest distance,
or walk the hardest mile,
i'd cross the hottest desert,
just to see your smile,
i'd give up every thing i have
even the clothes that i now wear,
just to look into your eyes,
and let you know i care,
my heart is filled to bursting,
whenever you are near,
i want to hold & kiss you
& take away your fears.
my very soul speaks your name,
in whispers every day,
it tells me that i love you,
in each and every way,
you mean the very world to me,
i stand with open heart,
i feel like only half a man,
whenever we're apart,
you are always on my mind,
my love is oh so true,
all my worries disappear,
when i'm holding you

lonetar25's photo
Thu 08/20/09 10:56 AM


i'd drive the longest distance,
or walk the hardest mile,
i'd cross the hottest desert,
just to see your smile,
i'd give up every thing i have
even the clothes that i now wear,
just to look into your eyes,
and let you know i care,


great write :thumbsup:

AngelLight's photo
Thu 08/20/09 10:59 AM
May you know and experience your deepest heart's desire..

A strong and passionate write! flowerforyou


writer_gurl's photo
Thu 08/20/09 11:04 AM
What passion

You tell those people where to go

YEAH!!

flowerforyou

bedlum1's photo
Thu 08/20/09 11:04 AM

May you know and experience your deepest heart's desire..

A strong and passionate write! flowerforyou



bedlum1's photo
Thu 08/20/09 11:06 AM
blessed beflowerforyou

greeneyedlady42's photo
Sun 08/23/09 05:21 AM
WOW!!

Every woman wants her man to feel that way- It would be really nice if they could all express it as wonderfully as you have-

That is awesome!!! Great writing-
Tressia

Gossipmpm's photo
Sun 08/23/09 09:48 AM
Wonderful write beautiful!

Your fan base keeps growing!!