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The cutter
She passes a cool Razor Through her skin She feels the toxic blood Drip from her vein The pain soothes her She becomes weak With pleasure She sighs Her troubles are gone She slashes the razor Deeper into Her skin She feels weak With jubilation She watches every bit if blood Her problems Begin to fade Her eyes are glossy Her ecstasy Tammy |
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Edited by
d4tc
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Wed 08/19/09 05:12 AM
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my youngest sister was a cutter. this is a perfect description of who she was.
very well conceived
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Yea my daughters have friends going through this
It's hard for them!
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The cutter She passes a cool Razor Through her skin She feels the toxic blood Drip from her vein The pain soothes her She becomes weak With pleasure She sighs Her troubles are gone She slashes the razor Deeper into Her skin She feels weak With jubilation She watches every bit if blood Her problems Begin to fade Her eyes are glossy Her ecstasy Tammy I think you have become my muse with this one, give me a few days to work out the kinks...but you did inspire me to write my next lyric.
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...Indeed, a symptom of a deeper pain I've worked with adults who have cut since childhood, and often found the cutting helped them cope with some traumatic incident or history... Not an easy topic to write on....good job T
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Not an easy subject and even more difficult if you have a child that cuts. My son was a cutter for a brief time: there's nothing more disturbing than finding your child with cuts all over their arms. He was able to stop, thank god, but the scars remain. I have yet to be able to write about it. Good job.
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It's not an easy
subject for anyone Watching my daughters friend go through this is tough Talked to her this morning Which bought on this write!
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My old girlfriend sister was a cutter. Its hard seeing someone going thru that. This is a great write becuz its almost exactly tha situation. (I hope not from experience) good job capturing tha emotional side of it
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Great write, a difficult subject but you did a wonderful job Tammy.
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Ouch, yup, had a couple of friends that dealt/deal with emotional pain this way. It is hard to know about and for some very hard to understand any sense of reason behind it, and trying to find new ways of expressing that pain both putting words to it and expelling the actual pain, ughhhh I agree well done on a rough subject....
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Thanks everyone
I hope I did the subject some justice |
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I use to cut when I was younger, thats pretty much how it feels. Great write!
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Thanks lil red!!
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