Topic: Blind Dreams
TwilightsTwin's photo
Wed 05/23/07 01:38 PM
Blind Dreams

By Katie (twilisht's Twin)
5-23-2007

Do the blind dream in color?
Or is the pattern mearly texture and sound?
The raindrops falling to earth,
Or footsteps pacing the ground.
How does one illustrate what one can not see?
Wind for example, or the love of a mother.
It exists because it is felt,
and made real by another.
If the loss of a sense makes us blind,
aren't we all but disabled?
Incomplete souls wandering the earth,
if only whole in dreams.
Does our dreams show us our utopia?
Our perfect moral egos...
Or do we lable them off as nightmares
when our true selves are shown?
To many walk with their eyes tightly closed.
Open thy hearts! The truth will be exposed!
Guidance of light, delight in the dark,
The feelings we felt, not images, will make its mark!

PetiteKitten's photo
Wed 05/23/07 01:40 PM
I honestly never knew you could write like that.......It's amazing and
very thought provoking.

daniel48706's photo
Wed 05/23/07 01:46 PM
very eye opening katie, thank you :smile:

WolfSpirt's photo
Wed 05/23/07 01:51 PM
Very nice, Katie, as is with your other poems. Keep up the good work.
Have you ever tried getting any of your poetry published?

TwilightsTwin's photo
Wed 05/23/07 01:51 PM
Thanks. We had a hell of a thunderstorm last night, they always tend to
spark my creative outlets.

WolfSpirt's photo
Wed 05/23/07 01:52 PM
Hiya, Kitten,how are you doing today?flowerforyou glasses

PetiteKitten's photo
Wed 05/23/07 01:54 PM
Doing just great Wolfy, how about you??


Yes, I agree with Wolf, Katie....Try and get your stuff published......I
think you'd do very well.

TwilightsTwin's photo
Wed 05/23/07 01:58 PM
Thanks guys.

I have a novel I wrote last winter at a literary agent now be reviewed.
But my poetry has just been something I do...for me.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 05/23/07 02:12 PM
Very good! flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 05/23/07 02:29 PM
Katie that was spectacular!!!

TwilightsTwin's photo
Thu 05/24/07 09:25 AM
bigsmile