Topic: Untitled (Suggestions?)
WolfEyez's photo
Mon 08/10/09 05:35 PM
Edited by WolfEyez on Mon 08/10/09 05:36 PM
The hours pass by and I still fail to sleep.
These thoughts are out of control and running deep.

A parade of questions are clouding my mind
And a glance at the clock lets me know there's still time.

When, where, why and how?
I've never demanded answers like I am doing right now.

What was it exactly that had me hating him so young?
What was it exactly that kept his name off my tongue?

Where was his conscious through this whole ordeal?
Or does he not possess one since it's evident he doesn't feel?

Why didn't he ever speak that one important phrase?
It is the one question that always has me in a haze.

And last, but not least:
( This last one is a beast)

How did I end up with a "father" like you?
It is not I, but you who needs a psychiatric review.





Kael31's photo
Mon 08/10/09 05:38 PM
liked it, it was poinant.

WolfEyez's photo
Mon 08/10/09 05:40 PM
Thank you :smile:

johncarl's photo
Mon 08/10/09 05:48 PM
grave yard blues. and i love the writeflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Mon 08/10/09 05:52 PM
nice one flowerforyou

Meg8771's photo
Mon 08/10/09 05:56 PM
flowerforyou

WolfEyez's photo
Mon 08/10/09 05:58 PM
Thanks, guys.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 08/10/09 06:03 PM
flowers

WolfEyez's photo
Mon 08/10/09 06:11 PM
Does ANYONE have any suggestions? I have so many untitled poems already ... I don't need more

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 08/10/09 06:18 PM
Questions on parade... spock (Title)

lonetar25's photo
Mon 08/10/09 06:20 PM
how about "i love you unsaid"

Euphoric_Dissonance's photo
Mon 08/10/09 06:21 PM

Unjust lineage, dejected spawn, regurgitated childhood.... yeah, I listen to too many death metal bands. How 'bout "I'll take bad parentage for 3:00am, Alex"

WolfEyez's photo
Mon 08/10/09 06:24 PM


Unjust lineage, dejected spawn, regurgitated childhood.... yeah, I listen to too many death metal bands. How 'bout "I'll take bad parentage for 3:00am, Alex"


Huh. Oh wow.

kc0003's photo
Mon 08/10/09 06:30 PM
dont know the whole story here...how about...
the walking man?
empty silence?

i dont know...
sorry, i tried to help

flowerforyou


WolfEyez's photo
Mon 08/10/09 06:31 PM

how about "i love you unsaid"



That last word gave me a title. What do you think about Unsaid Words?

WolfEyez's photo
Mon 08/10/09 06:31 PM

dont know the whole story here...how about...
the walking man?
empty silence?

i dont know...
sorry, i tried to help

flowerforyou




I appreciate the help, love.

robert1652's photo
Mon 08/10/09 07:51 PM
Edited by robert1652 on Mon 08/10/09 07:53 PM

Does ANYONE have any suggestions? I have so many untitled poems already ... I don't need more


Nice write by the wayflowerforyou