Topic: Someone Woke me
GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Fri 07/31/09 08:25 AM
Today I was awaken,
Yet I was not asleep,
The darkness has been taken,
And the lightness began to creep.

She did it without knowing,
She had no thought in mind,
She woke my inner spirit,
With the words she spoke so kind.

Her laugh has taken me upward,
Her smile makes me soar,
She never saw it coming,
But I'm glad I opened the door.

Today is a new history,
not written yet it seems,
but tomorrow I'll look back fondly,
of the one who woke my dreams.

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Fri 07/31/09 08:28 AM
like your writes......teasingbrunette..find myself replacing she with he...

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Fri 07/31/09 08:30 AM
Thank youflowerforyou

writer_gurl's photo
Fri 07/31/09 08:40 AM
Cute....Ooohhh, you meant the poemoops

I :heart: it

MzEm's photo
Fri 07/31/09 08:47 AM
Liking the flow, great write...

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Fri 07/31/09 09:40 AM
Thanks for the compliments.

flowerforyou flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 08/01/09 02:23 PM
Another sweet write flowerforyou

Jimmy59's photo
Fri 08/07/09 12:57 AM
Nice:thumbsup:

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Sun 03/28/10 02:00 PM
and from way back on page 78

bastet126's photo
Sun 03/28/10 02:06 PM
he's on a roll, a stroll thru memories! they are all really nice! flowerforyou if you run across any of mine in the archives, can you let me know the page numbers?? laugh flowerforyou

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Sun 03/28/10 02:08 PM
yeppers