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Topic: Somewhere on this planet.
GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Thu 07/30/09 01:29 PM
Somewhere on this planet, there are pieces of my heart.
Pieces that once belonged to me, that I have given away.
Taken by a few, given back or destroyed by others.
Somewhere there are still some in use.

I can feel it now, the history of my heart.
I can sense the distance, sense the dark hiding places the pieces were put.
Those pieces call me from time to time, but only to remind me.
Only to let me know I still do have a heart, though not whole.

Some more recent gifts have still got light,
Some recent gifts are in darkness.
The gift of my heart feels both sides of love.
But the love in my heart for those pieces lives on.

Someday I will give another piece, and it will be taken.
That day will be the day that all of the little shards return,
So I may give them once again.
Forever.

Smileaficionado's photo
Thu 07/30/09 02:02 PM
Thought provoking...emotive....B still my fractured heart!

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Thu 07/30/09 02:22 PM

Thought provoking...emotive....B still my fractured heart!



is that good?

Holly4459's photo
Thu 07/30/09 02:35 PM
beautifully written!flowers

Smileaficionado's photo
Thu 07/30/09 02:37 PM
laugh It's (in a word) splendid! Are you published?

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Thu 07/30/09 02:38 PM
Oh thanks to both of you... no it was just something I need to put out there.. my first.

Smileaficionado's photo
Thu 07/30/09 02:42 PM

Oh thanks to both of you... no it was just something I need to put out there.. my first.


You are talented...think about it.

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Thu 07/30/09 02:45 PM
Thanks!flowerforyou

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Thu 07/30/09 03:42 PM
You are from Tacoma right?

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 07/30/09 04:33 PM
Nice write! flowerforyou

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Thu 07/30/09 05:02 PM
thank youflowerforyou

Smileaficionado's photo
Thu 07/30/09 05:22 PM

You are from Tacoma right?


Yup...It's over 100 today!

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Thu 07/30/09 05:25 PM
Grew up in Auburn, federal way and renton... hiya ex-neighbor... trying to figure out why I left up there... oh wait I know.. I didn't know you then.... thats it....

flowerforyou flowerforyou love

Smileaficionado's photo
Thu 07/30/09 05:45 PM

Grew up in Auburn, federal way and renton... hiya ex-neighbor... trying to figure out why I left up there... oh wait I know.. I didn't know you then.... thats it....

flowerforyou flowerforyou love


Nice :wink: I live in NE Tacoma, just on the line near Federal Way. So, really...why'd you leave me here all alone?

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Thu 07/30/09 05:46 PM


Grew up in Auburn, federal way and renton... hiya ex-neighbor... trying to figure out why I left up there... oh wait I know.. I didn't know you then.... thats it....

flowerforyou flowerforyou love


Nice :wink: I live in NE Tacoma, just on the line near Federal Way. So, really...why'd you leave me here all alone?


I'm stupid! LOL

Smileaficionado's photo
Thu 07/30/09 05:55 PM



Grew up in Auburn, federal way and renton... hiya ex-neighbor... trying to figure out why I left up there... oh wait I know.. I didn't know you then.... thats it....

flowerforyou flowerforyou love


Nice :wink: I live in NE Tacoma, just on the line near Federal Way. So, really...why'd you leave me here all alone?


I'm stupid! LOL


I'm not one to argue with such insightful logic. :laughing:

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Thu 07/30/09 05:59 PM
gee thanks....

MirrorMirror's photo
Thu 07/30/09 06:05 PM

Somewhere on this planet, there are pieces of my heart.
Pieces that once belonged to me, that I have given away.
Taken by a few, given back or destroyed by others.
Somewhere there are still some in use.

I can feel it now, the history of my heart.
I can sense the distance, sense the dark hiding places the pieces were put.
Those pieces call me from time to time, but only to remind me.
Only to let me know I still do have a heart, though not whole.

Some more recent gifts have still got light,
Some recent gifts are in darkness.
The gift of my heart feels both sides of love.
But the love in my heart for those pieces lives on.

Someday I will give another piece, and it will be taken.
That day will be the day that all of the little shards return,
So I may give them once again.
Forever.

:thumbsup:

Smileaficionado's photo
Thu 07/30/09 06:05 PM

gee thanks....


Oh, no thanks necessary laugh ...really, why'd you move?

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Thu 07/30/09 06:11 PM


gee thanks....


Oh, no thanks necessary laugh ...really, why'd you move?


Served my Army time at Ft Lewis, grew up there, then got a chance to work at ABC las Vegas, took it...here I am after 15 years in TV and Movies, I took an IT job here to get a steady income.

thats the short version.

LOL

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