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Somewhere on this planet, there are pieces of my heart.
Pieces that once belonged to me, that I have given away. Taken by a few, given back or destroyed by others. Somewhere there are still some in use. I can feel it now, the history of my heart. I can sense the distance, sense the dark hiding places the pieces were put. Those pieces call me from time to time, but only to remind me. Only to let me know I still do have a heart, though not whole. Some more recent gifts have still got light, Some recent gifts are in darkness. The gift of my heart feels both sides of love. But the love in my heart for those pieces lives on. Someday I will give another piece, and it will be taken. That day will be the day that all of the little shards return, So I may give them once again. Forever. |
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Thought provoking...emotive....B still my fractured heart!
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Thought provoking...emotive....B still my fractured heart! is that good? |
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beautifully written!
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 It's (in a word) splendid! Are you published?
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Oh thanks to both of you... no it was just something I need to put out there.. my first.
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Oh thanks to both of you... no it was just something I need to put out there.. my first. You are talented...think about it. |
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Thanks!
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You are from Tacoma right?
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Nice write!
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thank you
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You are from Tacoma right? Yup...It's over 100 today! |
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Grew up in Auburn, federal way and renton... hiya ex-neighbor... trying to figure out why I left up there... oh wait I know.. I didn't know you then.... thats it....
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Grew up in Auburn, federal way and renton... hiya ex-neighbor... trying to figure out why I left up there... oh wait I know.. I didn't know you then.... thats it....
Nice  I live in NE Tacoma, just on the line near Federal Way. So, really...why'd you leave me here all alone?
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Grew up in Auburn, federal way and renton... hiya ex-neighbor... trying to figure out why I left up there... oh wait I know.. I didn't know you then.... thats it....
Nice I live in NE Tacoma, just on the line near Federal Way. So, really...why'd you leave me here all alone?
I'm stupid! LOL |
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Grew up in Auburn, federal way and renton... hiya ex-neighbor... trying to figure out why I left up there... oh wait I know.. I didn't know you then.... thats it....
Nice I live in NE Tacoma, just on the line near Federal Way. So, really...why'd you leave me here all alone?
I'm stupid! LOL I'm not one to argue with such insightful logic. 
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gee thanks....
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Somewhere on this planet, there are pieces of my heart. Pieces that once belonged to me, that I have given away. Taken by a few, given back or destroyed by others. Somewhere there are still some in use. I can feel it now, the history of my heart. I can sense the distance, sense the dark hiding places the pieces were put. Those pieces call me from time to time, but only to remind me. Only to let me know I still do have a heart, though not whole. Some more recent gifts have still got light, Some recent gifts are in darkness. The gift of my heart feels both sides of love. But the love in my heart for those pieces lives on. Someday I will give another piece, and it will be taken. That day will be the day that all of the little shards return, So I may give them once again. Forever. 
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gee thanks.... Oh, no thanks necessary ...really, why'd you move?
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gee thanks.... Oh, no thanks necessary ...really, why'd you move?
Served my Army time at Ft Lewis, grew up there, then got a chance to work at ABC las Vegas, took it...here I am after 15 years in TV and Movies, I took an IT job here to get a steady income. thats the short version. LOL |
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