Topic: life
Queene123's photo
Tue 07/28/09 04:33 PM
i have written down my thoughts
and the pains and sorrows i have encountered over the years
where i have convinced myself, im not really old. for i still feel like a teenager in a worn down body. i dont even act myself and having your own child call you old lady just makes it more of a laughling mento, and nothing to grieve or to fail on, as where your feeling you have waken up from nothing but a dream and hopeing a new day will begin, as it may seem that love is all around but yet love cant commit to one another, where you find yourself in a hole where you end up closing your mind and shutting each one out to forget the on going pain and look at the sky for the new beauty that is showing you a new outlook on life.

2cool4school's photo
Tue 07/28/09 04:37 PM
Queen, you are feeling deep today!!!!

Queene123's photo
Tue 07/28/09 04:43 PM

Queen, you are feeling deep today!!!!


if you havent seen my other poems
myspace page is on my profile on here
and you can read my other poems

2cool4school's photo
Tue 07/28/09 04:46 PM


Queen, you are feeling deep today!!!!


if you havent seen my other poems
myspace page is on my profile on here
and you can read my other poems

Thanks, I do not always read the poems. Have a great evening!! and keep writing, I need to read more!!!

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 07/28/09 05:34 PM
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