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Topic: Hermitage
Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Mon 07/20/09 10:29 AM
Hermitage Walls of bumpled roughness Interspersed with smooth patches Surround me. Tunnels dance Into other rooms. Subtle ones ramble above. The air, Not stagnant or putrid with decay, Beckons my thoughts To skip and sway. An underlying current Can be felt Like the ebb and flow of tide. Is this my blood That courses through Or spirit of mine And those of others Who from my eyes hide?

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 07/20/09 10:37 AM
Nice!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 07/20/09 10:38 AM
you, hide?....i think not is seems to me that you would be right out there in the open... nice piece my fkw

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Mon 07/20/09 10:46 AM
you, hide?....i think not is seems to me that you would be right out there in the open... nice piece my fkw Of course, I hide. I hide the treasures of others for they are not mine to reveal.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 07/20/09 10:53 AM
you, hide?....i think not is seems to me that you would be right out there in the open... nice piece my fkw Of course, I hide. I hide the treasures of others for they are not mine to reveal. perhaps not but, once discovered they belong to the world...

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Mon 07/20/09 11:03 AM
Nice work DKW!

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Mon 07/20/09 11:15 AM
Thanks, MzEm and Morn'in! Perhaps indeed, Kace, if those of the world interpret them correctly. Some things are in plain "sight" of some, yet still hidden and elusive to others.

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