Topic: Pain
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Fri 05/18/07 10:49 PM
One more slit on her wrist
one more suicide he decides to commit
one more beating she takes as she fights to break free
one more cry that says, 'someone please help me'

what do we live in today
what have we done to make it this way?
Immense pain consumes our souls
While sin continues to control

We kiss pain and sleep with sin
Giving up on the battles we are capable to win
Why are our hearts so broken?
How come all these thoughts go unspoken?

Are you sick of drowning in these tears?
Done with livin like this year after year
Be someone who comes from the bottom and reaches for the top
Strive to make all this pain and chaos stop

What are you doin with your head hung low
What are you doin not caring n jus letting go
What are you doin smiling at blood
Why has that become something thats fun?

I know what its like to feel unheard
Like your life is a hopeless blurr
When you bleed for comfort
As you run away from all your pain and hurt

But what if you are done with that
Wondering why life doesnt love you back
Say goodbye to that life
After all, you only have one chance to make things right

One life to make things right
Take as many chances as you need..just make it worth the fight
It all starts at one
To get up and strive to be someone
Even if someone is being the best you can be
Pursuing life and letting go of your worst memory

one more slit on her wrist
one more suicide he decides to commit
one more beating she takes as she fights to break free
one more cry that says, someone please help me'

no photo
Fri 05/18/07 10:53 PM
NSC..Do not take credit for what you did not write.....if you post
something by someone else put their name and give them the credit...you
are totally losing credibility as a writer here

Lost in the Depths of this World

by Heather

One more slit on her wrist
one more suicide he decides to commit
one more beating she takes as she fights to break free
one more cry that says, 'someone please help me'

what do we live in today
what have we done to make it this way?
Immense pain consumes our souls
While sin continues to control

We kiss pain and sleep with sin
Giving up on the battles we are capable to win
Why are our hearts so broken?
How come all these thoughts go unspoken?

Are you sick of drowning in these tears?
Done with livin like this year after year
Be someone who comes from the bottom and reaches for the top
Strive to make all this pain and chaos stop

What are you doin with your head hung low
What are you doin not caring n jus letting go
What are you doin smiling at blood
Why has that become something thats fun?

I know what its like to feel unheard
Like your life is a hopeless blurr
When you bleed for comfort
As you run away from all your pain and hurt

But what if you are done with that
Wondering why life doesnt love you back
Say goodbye to that life
After all, you only have one chance to make things right

One life to make things right
Take as many chances as you need..just make it worth the fight
It all starts at one
To get up and strive to be someone
Even if someone is being the best you can be
Pursuing life and letting go of your worst memory

one more slit on her wrist
one more suicide he decides to commit
one more beating she takes as she fights to break free
one more cry that says, someone please help me'

Submission date : 2007-05-17
Last edit : 2007-05-17

no photo
Fri 05/18/07 10:53 PM
NSC..Do not take credit for what you did not write.....if you post
something by someone else put their name and give them the credit...you
are totally losing credibility as a writer here

Lost in the Depths of this World

by Heather

One more slit on her wrist
one more suicide he decides to commit
one more beating she takes as she fights to break free
one more cry that says, 'someone please help me'

what do we live in today
what have we done to make it this way?
Immense pain consumes our souls
While sin continues to control

We kiss pain and sleep with sin
Giving up on the battles we are capable to win
Why are our hearts so broken?
How come all these thoughts go unspoken?

Are you sick of drowning in these tears?
Done with livin like this year after year
Be someone who comes from the bottom and reaches for the top
Strive to make all this pain and chaos stop

What are you doin with your head hung low
What are you doin not caring n jus letting go
What are you doin smiling at blood
Why has that become something thats fun?

I know what its like to feel unheard
Like your life is a hopeless blurr
When you bleed for comfort
As you run away from all your pain and hurt

But what if you are done with that
Wondering why life doesnt love you back
Say goodbye to that life
After all, you only have one chance to make things right

One life to make things right
Take as many chances as you need..just make it worth the fight
It all starts at one
To get up and strive to be someone
Even if someone is being the best you can be
Pursuing life and letting go of your worst memory

one more slit on her wrist
one more suicide he decides to commit
one more beating she takes as she fights to break free
one more cry that says, someone please help me'

Submission date : 2007-05-17
Last edit : 2007-05-17

wonderman37's photo
Fri 05/18/07 10:55 PM
wow dark but with some hope

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Fri 05/18/07 10:58 PM
eek sorry for the double post damn jsh gremlins got me

Differentkindofwench's photo
Fri 05/18/07 10:59 PM
Memories and beliefs - powerful things. Changing a destructive belief
system into a constructive one - long road, rarely a straight shot,
but one worth traveling...........