can someone rate me please so that i may make my profile better!!

oh my god why is everyone asking this question. come on people, look in the mirror and decide for yourself

This IS called a section for others to rate a profile.

Fill it out more, more about your self, what you like to do, interests and activities. Tell us more about the woman you seek.

"well if there is anything else you want to know just ask!! "

They don't want to ask, they want you tell them in your profile.

"looking to find someone that is looking for a good guy"

The terms 'good guy' and 'nice guy' are routinely blasted in the forums. Find a more creative term to describe yourself.
The shirt and tie pic is cool.
Someone you know has a digital camera, ask them for a favor, if its a single woman all the better. She may want to save you from the evils of internet dating.

Welcome and have fun.

I like it. It's to the point and you got great pics. I don't see why you should change anything.