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Topic: Help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Torylynn's photo
Wed 07/01/09 05:04 AM
Unfortunately he is in for parole violation...stupid ***...but I love him and can't see life without him...

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Wed 07/01/09 05:07 AM
Nice poem and thank you...STill looking for the right one though...I am a hopeless romantic and this really sucks...I put in words how I feel in letters but it's not the same...tears

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Wed 07/01/09 10:29 AM

Nice poem and thank you...STill looking for the right one though...I am a hopeless romantic and this really sucks...I put in words how I feel in letters but it's not the same...tears
You do not realize how much of your feelings do come through with your words. Oddly enough tone, inflection, and yes emotion do come through. Hopeless romantic? Holy Hell, Girl, how much more of a romantic scene do you need? How much more would prove faith in people, their potential, and their feelings than what you are dealing with now? Weird as it may seem - you are LIVING this poem you're after. If you look back at your dates and your letters - all together WRITE it. The right poem can only be written by you or him. The other posters on this thread tried to explain that to you, I demonstrated what they're telling you. Take a deep breath and let all those feelings come out in words. Don't worry about rhythm, don't worry about rhyme JUST WRITE down those feelings as they occur. The rest will evolve through your emotion. YOU CAN DO THIS, cause you care.


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