Topic: you came near me
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Sun 06/28/09 07:24 PM


first, I saw you
didn't want you to be aware
I had to learn how to look at you
you know, without your notice

finally I made a move
don't be fooled, I was more frightened than you
your scent caught me
kept my cool, just barely

in the same room
my God, so nice
put my thoughts together, quick
she will see through me

you came near me
can you feel it
I'm burning
hard to think let alone speak

without a sound, heart pounding
your lips touched mine
soft, sweet, you ran your tongue across my bottom lip
panic or bliss, I can't tell the difference

this was the beginning
from then on I was yours
you ruled my heart
I knew I could never stop falling

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Sun 06/28/09 07:30 PM
Really nice...thanks for the readflowerforyou

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Sun 06/28/09 07:33 PM
thank you for reading

michael

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Sun 06/28/09 08:02 PM
wow... love it!

MadameGeek's photo
Sun 06/28/09 08:04 PM
"I knew I could never stop falling "

You have defined what keeps love alive - continuing to find fascination in one's beloved.


LAMom's photo
Mon 06/29/09 12:17 PM
:heart: Simply Heart touching:heart:

AngelLight's photo
Mon 06/29/09 05:56 PM
Beautiful write Michael....

The beauty of vulnerability and the gift(s) it renders flowerforyou

carold's photo
Wed 07/01/09 06:55 AM
Sounds like a soft place to fall :) Endjoyed reading :)

Gossipmpm's photo
Wed 07/01/09 06:56 AM
:heart:

MzEm's photo
Wed 07/01/09 08:52 AM
Awww, this is so sweet.

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Wed 07/01/09 05:31 PM
You captured that perfectly, thank you so much for sharing flowerforyou

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Wed 07/01/09 05:48 PM
Very nice! Thank you!