Topic: you came near me | |
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first, I saw you didn't want you to be aware I had to learn how to look at you you know, without your notice finally I made a move don't be fooled, I was more frightened than you your scent caught me kept my cool, just barely in the same room my God, so nice put my thoughts together, quick she will see through me you came near me can you feel it I'm burning hard to think let alone speak without a sound, heart pounding your lips touched mine soft, sweet, you ran your tongue across my bottom lip panic or bliss, I can't tell the difference this was the beginning from then on I was yours you ruled my heart I knew I could never stop falling |
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Really nice...thanks for the read
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thank you for reading
michael |
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wow... love it!
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"I knew I could never stop falling "
You have defined what keeps love alive - continuing to find fascination in one's beloved. |
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Simply Heart touching
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Beautiful write Michael....
The beauty of vulnerability and the gift(s) it renders |
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Sounds like a soft place to fall :) Endjoyed reading :)
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Awww, this is so sweet.
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You captured that perfectly, thank you so much for sharing
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Very nice! Thank you!
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