Topic: Love
InMyMemory's photo
Wed 06/24/09 11:39 PM
I see the wonder in your eyes, autumn in my dreams,

Look into their soft amber glow so divine a gleam.
Opal teeth and brightly lit smile, show your beauty shining out,
Velvet kiss upon such lush lips brought love without a doubt.
Every time you beam up at me I feel so lost in time,

You are worth so much, if I was a penny you’d be a dime.
Over and over I fall, for the grace you have within,
Until strands of time pulls us apart, forever we will have been.

Lavender and jasmine, just like your teddy bear,
Instill in me a thought of just how much I care.
Never before have I been so swept away,
Deliver myself to you, forever I will stay.
So amazing you are, shine as bright as any star,
A love can bridge any gap, however far.
You are the one I love, forever and always.



Too bad she didn't love me back. :(

Anyone tell me what was unique about this poem? And what the girl's name was? Bonus points if you can!

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 06/25/09 07:35 AM
Beautiful write! flowerforyou

tony39h's photo
Sun 06/28/09 07:34 AM
jasmine