Topic: Without You
Lilypetal's photo
Tue 06/23/09 08:42 PM
Breathing
Thinking
Wanting
Needing
Inside the nothingness
That is me
Without you

Dreaming
Hoping
Wishing
Pleading
For the silence to end
That deafens me
Without you

Laughing
Crying
Inside
Dying
With this empty heart
That tears me in two
Without you

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Tue 06/23/09 08:47 PM
Wow smokin

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Tue 06/23/09 08:47 PM
flowerforyou

Winx's photo
Tue 06/23/09 08:54 PM
flowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 06/23/09 08:54 PM

Breathing
Thinking
Wanting
Needing
Inside the nothingness
That is me
Without you

Dreaming
Hoping
Wishing
Pleading
For the silence to end
That deafens me
Without you

Laughing
Crying
Inside
Dying
With this empty heart
That tears me in two
Without you






flowers


Lilypetal's photo
Tue 06/23/09 09:37 PM
Thank you everyone! :heart:

MzEm's photo
Wed 06/24/09 06:05 AM
Very beautiful Miss Lily...

AngelLight's photo
Wed 06/24/09 03:33 PM

Breathing
Thinking
Wanting
Needing
Inside the nothingness
That is me
Without you

Dreaming
Hoping
Wishing
Pleading
For the silence to end
That deafens me
Without you

Laughing
Crying
Inside
Dying
With this empty heart
That tears me in two
Without you




Very well written and truly poignant Lily.

Lilypetal's photo
Wed 06/24/09 04:06 PM
:heart:MzEm:heart:

flowerforyou AngelLightflowerforyou


Thank you both so much!! Compliments from wonderful writers are such an honor!!!

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Wed 06/24/09 07:59 PM
:smile: flowerforyou