I won't try to speak for everybody, but -- if I had a nickel for every profile I've read that was SO empty and vapid that it wasn't even worth the 4 seconds it took to read it -- the ones that say "I don't know what to write here" or "Anything you want to know, you'll have to ask" or "I'm not going to fill this out until I see if it's worth it" or "I'm laid back and easy going" or that sort of thing -- I could buy myself a dozen Saturn rockets and have enough money left over to go to Arby's.

If someone isn't interested enough to read a few paragraphs about you, is that someone you really think is worth your time?

I don't know. My profile is long, and one of the reasons for that is that it WEEDS OUT the ones who either don't have the time, the patience, or the literacy skills to read it. I wouldn't want to deal with those people anyway.

"Informative yet simple" is good -- but I think you're coming up a little short on the "informative" part. Just one guy's opinion.

Common Lex, it's not nearly as bad as a lot of them. There are some that literally say "if you wanna know anything jus ask".

The picture looks makes you look belligerent though. Looks like she'd stuff a brick into her pillow before pillow fighting.

What you've got is OK -- but you need more. I don't really get a sense of who you are; more like a general, vague idea but it's not solid enough to make any sort of assessment.

Maybe a little more about your life, about what you want from the site -- picture yourself 5 years from now. Where do you want to be? What kind of life do you want to have? What do you need to do to get there?

But, hey, I'm biased. My profile is 1482 pages long. Meh, writers write, right?

Good luck. You've got a bit of a foundation there. I'd like to see you build something a little more cohesive on it.

I dont think its very fair actually. im happy with my profile thank u very much. and you know what? ive seen PLENTY of guys, older and younger with scarcley anything on their page! their name, age and favourite sport and there done. All thigns considered, ive done well actually compared to some other people

I dont think its very fair actually. im happy with my profile thank u very much. and you know what? ive seen PLENTY of guys, older and younger with scarcley anything on their page! their name, age and favourite sport and there done.