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You are the night that surrounds me When I am alone The whispers that beckon Speak from the pillow I hold. You are the heartbeat Sustaining my life The water to quench A thirst that won't dry. Perhaps you're the tune That plays fond in my mind Or a smile that shines To brighten my night. You are the one Whom touches my soul Kissing my pain With the love you well show. I'm only worthy to lie at your feet Yet gently you urge These strange feelings in me. To grant you a wish If only I could With heartfelt emotion You know that I would. To hold you eternal I'd give you my soul To love you forever This, dear, is my goal. Fadedspirit 6/16/2009 |
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Unhidden You are the night that surrounds me When I am alone The whispers that beckon Speak from the pillow I hold. You are the heartbeat Sustaining my life The water to quench A thirst that won't dry. Perhaps you're the tune That plays fond in my mind Or a smile that shines To brighten my night. You are the one Whom touches my soul Kissing my pain With the love you well show. I'm only worthy to lie at your feet Yet gently you urge These strange feelings in me. To grant you a wish If only I could With heartfelt emotion You know that I would. To hold you eternal I'd give you my soul To love you forever This, dear, is my goal. Fadedspirit 6/16/2009 Very nice! Thank you for sharing this... |
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NIiiii-CE!
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Welcome Home,,,
Beautiful Soul you |
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A sweet caressing write
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nice write, you have a poetical voice that is truly lyrical. I hope things have been well for you my friend.
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nice to see you my friend
a good piece here |
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Beautiful write! (((Fade)))
Hey stranger good to see you wander back home! WB! |
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Thank you vivian2981 for your comment, I'm glad you liked the write.
Hee hee Thanks DKW. Aww thanks LAMom. I try to get back when I can. I miss y'all. Aww, thanks AngelLight. Hey there Jimz and thanks bro. Things have been pretty hectic here, but all is well. I hope all is well your way also. Thanks kc. Nice to see you again also. One of these days life is gonna calm down I hope....lol Awww thanks (((MsTeddyBear)))! I hope all is well with you. Sorry about being away for so long. I'm trying to come back more often. |
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