Topic: the him that makes her
d4tc's photo
Sat 06/13/09 10:49 PM




How
sad

she
is


waiting


worrying


for her
Mr. Right


to make
everything appear

all right



NOW


knowing no other
good night

without
him

a friend
once said

to this
head

"maybe
its her"

whom when
questioned

knows nothing

she is guilty

guilty as she
by appearance

used as
a dress

now on
clearance

Worried

She
waits up late

furious

her finger nails
tap

faster

they tap

cursing

crushing

on her ego
she caps

flustered

her lips unbitten
since



snap



i cant remember
that

far back

for she

wants
her wants

and NEEDS
her needs

knowing
her wants
him
really what
she NEEDS




snap



i take that
all back


she wants
her





Mr. Rightnow

nvkikigirl's photo
Sat 06/13/09 11:23 PM
I really like this, d4tc!!! :thumbsup: flowerforyou

no photo
Sat 06/13/09 11:23 PM
Loved it...


Jimmy59's photo
Sat 06/13/09 11:27 PM
Liked this write:thumbsup:

no photo
Sat 06/13/09 11:27 PM
:banana: :banana: :banana: Beautiful! :banana: :banana:

no photo
Sun 06/14/09 06:09 PM
Very nice...I really liked this..(((((d4tc)))))
smooched :heart: drinker :banana: smooched :heart: drinker

MzEm's photo
Sun 06/14/09 06:13 PM
Dig that....

AngelLight's photo
Sun 06/14/09 07:26 PM
Sweet J....nice honey flowerforyou

no photo
Sun 06/14/09 08:22 PM
Most enjoyable J drinker drinker

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 06/16/09 10:01 AM
:thumbsup: (Applause, applause, applause) I do so love your subtlety :tongue: bigsmile

no photo
Tue 06/16/09 11:55 AM





How
sad

she
is


waiting


worrying


for her
Mr. Right


to make
everything appear

all right



NOW


knowing no other
good night

without
him

a friend
once said

to this
head

"maybe
its her"

whom when
questioned

knows nothing

she is guilty

guilty as she
by appearance

used as
a dress

now on
clearance

Worried

She
waits up late

furious

her finger nails
tap

faster

they tap

cursing

crushing

on her ego
she caps

flustered

her lips unbitten
since



snap



i cant remember
that

far back

for she

wants
her wants

and NEEDS
her needs

knowing
her wants
him
really what
she NEEDS




snap



i take that
all back


she wants
her





Mr. Rightnow


You rocked that one! Last few lines in particular~great~

tanyaann's photo
Tue 06/16/09 11:59 AM
Good stuff!

But to me its a little sad to have to have someone else

'to make
everything appear

all right'

ohwell


But great write! flowers


LAMom's photo
Wed 06/17/09 08:51 AM
flowers flowers

d4tc's photo
Wed 06/17/09 10:41 AM
Thank You All,

LAMom
tanya
MSWiz
DKW
pkd
Angel
MzEm
2KM
Modela
Jimmy
Ainjel
Kiki

bigsmile




no photo
Wed 06/17/09 10:52 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou