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I am just trying to get an honest opinion on my profile,any tips or critics are welcome.
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Written part is fine but man you look a little scary perhaps crack a smile.
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And maybe put a shirt on
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Maybe a , it won't kill you....I promise
More pics Everyone those |
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Howdy neighbor! Yes, more pictures and
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A Photo with a bird or with your fingers up your nose would be good too..
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A Photo with a bird or with your fingers up your nose would be good too.. |
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A Photo with a bird or with your fingers up your nose would be good too.. Yes...def a pic with your finger up your nose. |
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your profile kinda reads like you weren't smiling when you wrote that either. and i agree, put up some smiling pics! good luck!
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Only thing missing is the number board
Just jokin Bry. Welcome to mingle. Have a great time in here. there are a lot of really kewl people on here. |
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I am just trying to get an honest opinion on my profile,any tips or critics are welcome. thanks |
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You may want to put a shirt on and a smile will help.
Add some of your interest. |
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I honestly think you should reply to this thread you made as well.
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Definitely put a shirt on.... naked makes you look like you are waiting on a one night stand! LOL sorry.... just being honest.
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Edited by
Unknow
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Wed 06/10/09 07:47 PM
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Smile. Put a shirt on. Lose the "real woman" term. It's corny and meaningless. Also eliminate "I have had my heart ripped out." It makes you sound like damaged goods. Add a little more depth and positive vibes to the essay. The overall effect of the essay is not likely to get a woman's attention.
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wow thanks for the feedback. it should help me craft a better idea of how to write a description of myself and what i'm looking for. as far as pic's go I'll have to get some more current one's most pic's I have, my children are with me, I dont find it appropriate to put them on a dating site with me. even thought it show's me as I really am. i'll get on it later today and thanks again.
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