Topic: honestly what do you think?
Bry75's photo
Wed 06/10/09 06:24 PM
I am just trying to get an honest opinion on my profile,any tips or critics are welcome.
thanks

geektothetenth's photo
Wed 06/10/09 06:29 PM
Written part is fine but man you look a little scary perhaps crack a smile.

Dan99's photo
Wed 06/10/09 06:30 PM
And maybe put a shirt on

writer_gurl's photo
Wed 06/10/09 06:33 PM
Maybe a bigsmile , it won't kill you....I promise:tongue:

More pics:smile: :smile: :smile: Everyone :heart: those

Jules0565's photo
Wed 06/10/09 06:35 PM
Howdy neighbor! drinker Yes, more pictures and bigsmile

Dan99's photo
Wed 06/10/09 06:36 PM
A Photo with a bird or with your fingers up your nose would be good too..


Jules0565's photo
Wed 06/10/09 06:37 PM

A Photo with a bird or with your fingers up your nose would be good too..




rofl

Mayhem_J's photo
Wed 06/10/09 06:38 PM

A Photo with a bird or with your fingers up your nose would be good too..




Yes...def a pic with your finger up your nose.

bastet126's photo
Wed 06/10/09 06:40 PM
your profile kinda reads like you weren't smiling when you wrote that either. and i agree, put up some smiling pics! good luck! flowerforyou

rara777's photo
Wed 06/10/09 06:44 PM
Only thing missing is the number board:smile:

Just jokin Bry.drinker

Welcome to mingle. Have a great time in here. there are a lot of really kewl people on here.drinker

MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 06/10/09 07:13 PM

I am just trying to get an honest opinion on my profile,any tips or critics are welcome.
thanks
smitten dreamydrool

agbbieannie's photo
Wed 06/10/09 07:30 PM
You may want to put a shirt on and a smile will help. flowerforyou

Add some of your interest.

Dan99's photo
Wed 06/10/09 07:32 PM
I honestly think you should reply to this thread you made as well.

one4me2's photo
Wed 06/10/09 07:33 PM
Definitely put a shirt on.... naked makes you look like you are waiting on a one night stand! LOL sorry.... just being honest.

no photo
Wed 06/10/09 07:44 PM
Edited by Unknow on Wed 06/10/09 07:47 PM
Smile. Put a shirt on. Lose the "real woman" term. It's corny and meaningless. Also eliminate "I have had my heart ripped out." It makes you sound like damaged goods. Add a little more depth and positive vibes to the essay. The overall effect of the essay is not likely to get a woman's attention.

Bry75's photo
Thu 06/11/09 06:24 AM
wow thanks for the feedback. it should help me craft a better idea of how to write a description of myself and what i'm looking for. as far as pic's go I'll have to get some more current one's most pic's I have, my children are with me, I dont find it appropriate to put them on a dating site with me. even thought it show's me as I really am. i'll get on it later today and thanks again.:smile: