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Topic: Solitudes Thirst
brwnkimba's photo
Fri 05/29/09 11:00 PM
It was such a lovely sound she sang as the morning sun showered vivacity over our bodies.
Providing the warmth missed from twilight until this waking dawn.
Our lips met with summer’s passionate sweat.
We lay side by side knowing not the next move to spawn.

The breathe we take escapes our chests; we ponder if they’d be heard with their seductive tones?
I sense her destiny is with someone else, but it’s me that would never leave her to be alone.
Cheated 1 time too many out of what was supposed to be a sure victory.
She weaved a web of charm and beauty casting a spell wrapped in mystery.

This vacant feeling in my heart has me in search of an eternal tenant.
I placate the gods of love in hopes that her presence in my soul is infinite.
I can tame the feral side of my lustful wiles, though urges growing within won’t calm for very long.
It’s drowning my ardor the advances she denies me, without the signs my heart still beats so strong.

I canvas our time apart as the exposé of novel pain supplies the artful elegance with Broadway flair.
Not with any unique resolve juxtapose, we transferred positive energy unlike any 2 forces can compare.

Alone I’ve funneled listlessly through this existence with bogus grandiosity as my internal chaperone.
Only now is this reality haunting me that I may live the time I’ve left all on my own.

Place my charred remnants inside the bottle of barren hopes never sought for rescue.
My chakra in shock as well planned this plot she performed flawlessly was no miscue.

Just as dreams of the lonely bring streams of tears that quench Solitudes thirst.
It’s the best that I can recall ever being treated by a woman, but also the very worst.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 05/30/09 06:17 AM
I allways enjoy your writtings (((Brwnkimba))) flowerforyou :smile:
You have such a flare for writting, a mighty flare!

brwnkimba's photo
Sat 05/30/09 09:11 AM
Blessings MsTeddyBear2u and thank you so much. You have a wonderful weekend.
flowerforyou

Diamond4ever's photo
Sat 05/30/09 11:29 AM
This is a powerful write,,,,
captivating,,,,,your insight/self expression flowerforyou

brwnkimba's photo
Sat 05/30/09 03:18 PM
Very appreciative of your extremely kind words Diamond4ever and I am thankful for the time taken to read this poem!

Take Careflowerforyou

Gossipmpm's photo
Sat 05/30/09 04:10 PM
That was a waaay goood write!!

brwnkimba's photo
Sat 05/30/09 07:24 PM
That's WAAAAYYYY COOOOOOlLLLL of you to say Gossipmpm.
blushing

no photo
Sat 05/30/09 07:51 PM
Such longing, regret and passion expressed. Hope springs eternal. Wishing the best for you always.

brwnkimba's photo
Sat 05/30/09 08:36 PM
Hi Princess, thank you and everything you said is exactly what I feel but all at 1 time. Life is so confusing.

:heart:

d4tc's photo
Sun 05/31/09 11:01 AM
I see a man

Strong
Fit
Takes care of himself

Taking care of himself in
a way that others can only
benefit from

A man that most men
would despise if it
was not their own
whom man being
in that shape

A man deserving

Deserving all that
he strives to become

for goodness sakes

drinker


Lilypetal's photo
Sun 05/31/09 11:03 AM
brokenheart Beautiful!

MzEm's photo
Sun 05/31/09 05:10 PM
Very good write...

brwnkimba's photo
Mon 06/01/09 06:33 AM
Thank you d4tc, Lilypetal and MzEm,
for making me smile this morning I am in your debt. Smiles are never guaranteed during the day and you all started my morning off the right way.bigsmile

no photo
Mon 06/01/09 07:47 AM
Such a Nice Write.flowerforyou flowers drinker

tanyaann's photo
Mon 06/01/09 08:05 AM
*sighs* Oh sweets, your writing is so elegant and heartfelt! *big hugs*

LAMom's photo
Mon 06/01/09 08:33 AM
Hello You,,,

Your canvas so vivid,,, blessings to you
Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :heart:

brwnkimba's photo
Tue 06/02/09 10:33 AM
Thank you 2KidsMom for sharing your time with me.
tanyaann you know just what to say to me, big huggs back as we embrace and lose track of time.
LAMom the way you feel my writing ooooh my. I wish I could here you recite some of your poetry.:heart:



tanyaann's photo
Tue 06/02/09 11:11 AM

tanyaann you know just what to say to me, big huggs back as we embrace and lose track of time.



blushing

Time would only be an abstract in our minds. There would be no ticking of clocks. Only the flow of breath would mark the time. :wink:


MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 06/02/09 11:14 AM

It was such a lovely sound she sang as the morning sun showered vivacity over our bodies.
Providing the warmth missed from twilight until this waking dawn.
Our lips met with summer’s passionate sweat.
We lay side by side knowing not the next move to spawn.

The breathe we take escapes our chests; we ponder if they’d be heard with their seductive tones?
I sense her destiny is with someone else, but it’s me that would never leave her to be alone.
Cheated 1 time too many out of what was supposed to be a sure victory.
She weaved a web of charm and beauty casting a spell wrapped in mystery.

This vacant feeling in my heart has me in search of an eternal tenant.
I placate the gods of love in hopes that her presence in my soul is infinite.
I can tame the feral side of my lustful wiles, though urges growing within won’t calm for very long.
It’s drowning my ardor the advances she denies me, without the signs my heart still beats so strong.

I canvas our time apart as the exposé of novel pain supplies the artful elegance with Broadway flair.
Not with any unique resolve juxtapose, we transferred positive energy unlike any 2 forces can compare.

Alone I’ve funneled listlessly through this existence with bogus grandiosity as my internal chaperone.
Only now is this reality haunting me that I may live the time I’ve left all on my own.

Place my charred remnants inside the bottle of barren hopes never sought for rescue.
My chakra in shock as well planned this plot she performed flawlessly was no miscue.

Just as dreams of the lonely bring streams of tears that quench Solitudes thirst.
It’s the best that I can recall ever being treated by a woman, but also the very worst.

:thumbsup: nice:thumbsup:

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 06/02/09 12:01 PM
"Sittin' on the dock of the bay
Wonderin' what you may have sent her way?
Watchin' the thirst roll in
bottled contentment rolls away again"

The worst is the best; maybe we're all a lil more bipolar than we realize. Haunting write. flowerforyou




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