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I have been on this site for awhile and I have yet to find what I'm looking for. So please tell me what u think of my profile. Thank you.
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i cant find my keys either
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I've been here 2 years & have not found was I was looking for
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I have been on this site for awhile and I have yet to find what I'm looking for. So please tell me what u think of my profile. Thank you. geeze!! this is your first post and it shows you have been on here a year (humm) you should join the forums more often |
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it is always in the last place you look......
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i cant find my keys either |
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looking good to me , be your self , hugs
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L00ks g00d t0 me
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First sentence - sooooo very generic. You need to spice up that intro a bit.
Third sentence - don't even mention games or drama. BIG turnoff. Those that say anything about games or drama, no matter what they say about them, are quite often construed as the ones to start it. The next 8 sentences are also nothing but canned material. What's special about you? What makes you unique? What makes you tick? What do you do? Giving your man what he desires...that's where you start to sound appealing again. The next paragraph sounds better, a little deeper. Then you bring up the damn games again. None of us play games or are willing to admit we do. Keep that damn word out of your profile. Elaborate on what kind of man you want. You don't have any expectations other than open and honest? Looks to me like you're looking for Average Joe. You haven't found him here yet? A thanks is nice at the end but still a dull way of saying it. Your profile in general really needs some spice. You have good things to say, but should just put some thought into how you say it. Sorry if I come off as an a$$hole. I'm really a nice guy just giving my honest and best opinion, critique and advice. And yeah, you've been here for months and have 1 post? Really, give the forums a shot. You'll find something there. |
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Good Pics.
Personally your profile looks good. A lot better than most of the 1 paragraph profiles you see. Like people are saying, even popping on the forums now and then to say hello to newcomers is a good way of getting into the groove of things. Even if the people you meet from the forums arent in your back yard, it will give you some prep for when you do find someone. TM |
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