Topic: My rain
Gossipmpm's photo
Tue 05/26/09 07:32 AM
The
H2o
It falls

Playing music
On the widowsill

Droplets
Of soul washing
Wisdom

That make me think
Enough
To create

Watch the
Droplets
Cry
Downwards
Towards
The earth

To sustain
The life
Growing
Beneath us

I want to
Drink it up
And
Grow
Beyond
My realm

To drink
The purest
Of all waters

To wash
In the wisdom

The

Rain


Brings




Tammy5/09


MzEm's photo
Tue 05/26/09 07:42 AM

The
H2o
It falls

Playing music
On the widowsill

Droplets
Of soul washing
Wisdom

That make me think
Enough
To create

Watch the
Droplets
Cry
Downwards
Towards
The earth

To sustain
The life
Growing
Beneath us

I want to
Drink it up
And
Grow
Beyond
My realm

To drink
The purest
Of all waters

To wash
In the wisdom

The

Rain


Brings




Tammy5/09




Very good...thought provoking...

no photo
Tue 05/26/09 08:09 AM
Great write. I always associate water with birth and rebirth and cleansingflowerforyou flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Tue 05/26/09 03:36 PM
Another great write Tammy.

So much said in so few words flowerforyou :heart:

I love how you say

"I want to
Drink it up
And
Grow
Beyond
My realm" .......that is so beautiuful.

Gossipmpm's photo
Wed 05/27/09 03:36 AM
Thank you:heart:

AngelFireDream's photo
Thu 05/28/09 06:56 AM
Nice....certain parts really stood out for me. Thanks.

Michael1427's photo
Thu 05/28/09 06:23 PM
How wonderful that moment must have been, when those thoughts spilled out of that pen happy thank you for the write; it is beautiful

Gossipmpm's photo
Thu 05/28/09 07:14 PM
Ty mic:heart: