Topic: RATE MY PROFILE PLEASE
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Tue 05/26/09 03:17 AM
so what new to the site

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Tue 05/26/09 03:48 AM
G'morn.sweetheart.:smile: flowerforyou I think your profile looks fairly well & I understood your expectations & the info.pertaining to yourself however your sentence structure could use some work.I'll give 2 examples below.Godspeed!Cy
:smile: flowerforyou
1)[and understands the work honesty]change to[understands the value of work ethics]
2)[so what new to the site]change to[So what is new on the site?]