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so what new to the site
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G'morn.sweetheart.
I think your profile looks fairly well & I understood your expectations & the info.pertaining to yourself however your sentence structure could use some work.I'll give 2 examples below.Godspeed!Cy
1)[and understands the work honesty]change to[understands the value of work ethics] 2)[so what new to the site]change to[So what is new on the site?] |
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I think your profile looks fairly well & I understood your expectations & the info.pertaining to yourself however your sentence structure could use some work.I'll give 2 examples below.Godspeed!Cy