Topic: i cant sleep
epicsoldier's photo
Sat 05/23/09 01:56 AM
i'm tired of rhymes and trying to be clever.
i'll let my words deliver my heart.

i can't sleep as well as i used to.
i stay up late every night, falling asleep with the tv on.
i miss her too much, i reminisce of just how beautiful i once saw her as.
And i'm tired of not being able to fall asleep.
i'm stuck in a rut,
i cant sleep, and i dream of her.
such a problem to have.
I want to be in love again, I want to see beauty again.
i'm tired of being heartbroken,
i want to feel alive again.
i want to feel human, once more.


You want to know why we have desires?
It's to show us we are all incomplete.
They lead us to the person who can make us whole.
<3

nvkikigirl's photo
Sat 05/23/09 02:20 AM
great write!:thumbsup: waving

AngelLight's photo
Sat 05/23/09 09:28 AM

i'm tired of rhymes and trying to be clever.
i'll let my words deliver my heart.

i can't sleep as well as i used to.
i stay up late every night, falling asleep with the tv on.
i miss her too much, i reminisce of just how beautiful i once saw her as.
And i'm tired of not being able to fall asleep.
i'm stuck in a rut,
i cant sleep, and i dream of her.
such a problem to have.
I want to be in love again, I want to see beauty again.
i'm tired of being heartbroken,
i want to feel alive again.
i want to feel human, once more.


You want to know why we have desires?
It's to show us we are all incomplete.
They lead us to the person who can make us whole.
<3



"i'll let my words deliver my heart.".....I love how you said that.....your words did deliver your heart! :thumbsup:

I agree, great write.


epicsoldier's photo
Sat 05/23/09 12:03 PM
thank you =]

no photo
Sat 05/23/09 12:11 PM
Sounds like a mad case of insomnia. A great writedrinker