Topic: Inspired Writing - You tell me if its creative :)
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Thu 05/21/09 10:52 PM
Edited by BillySuvol on Thu 05/21/09 11:26 PM
Why do I allow you
To walk away
You do your best
To make me betray

Is this your master plan
What makes you this way
All I have ever done
Is love the games you play

Why must you be
so cruel and insecure
Can you not let me go
And remove the lure

Why is it so hard
for you to be sure
All of this time
I just want the cure



**edited**

kc0003's photo
Thu 05/21/09 10:58 PM

Why do I allow
You to walk away
You do your best
To make me betray

Why is this your plan
What makes you this way
All I have ever done
Is love the games you play

Why must you be
so cruel and insecure
Can you not let me go
And take away the lure

Why is it so hard
for you to be sure
All of this time
I just want the cure




inspiration comes in many forms
creativity opens the door to solution

well done!

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Fri 05/22/09 12:41 AM
i agree with kc

and it's kinda like the age old question "what is art?"


good job billy. just keep doing what you're doing,,,,,the rest follows

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Fri 05/22/09 12:42 AM

i agree with kc

and it's kinda like the age old question "what is art?"


good job billy. just keep doing what you're doing,,,,,the rest follows



After I wrote that.....I sat down and wrote it again on paper....but with colored markers and colored pencils......it looks awesome....going in my art room! Thanks guys!

Diamond4ever's photo
Fri 05/22/09 12:44 AM


i agree with kc

and it's kinda like the age old question "what is art?"


good job billy. just keep doing what you're doing,,,,,the rest follows



After I wrote that.....I sat down and wrote it again on paper....but with colored markers and colored pencils......it looks awesome....going in my art room! Thanks guys!


you're welcome flowers

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Fri 05/22/09 03:20 AM
when writing it down, sometimes things seem clearer in our mind-very niceflowerforyou

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Mon 06/08/09 05:48 AM
:heart:

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Mon 06/08/09 06:39 AM
Edited by MsWizard on Mon 06/08/09 06:41 AM

Why do I allow you
To walk away
You do your best
To make me betray

Is this your master plan
What makes you this way
All I have ever done
Is love the games you play

Why must you be
so cruel and insecure
Can you not let me go
And remove the lure

Why is it so hard
for you to be sure
All of this time
I just want the cure



**edited**


Creativity is like beauty~it's all subjective. The real question here is do YOU think it's creative? Is it original? Does it say what want it to say? Is it a thought that's relatable? Is it something that you are thoroughly satisfied with?

If you have completed the task you set out on, then you are the only one that needs to answer these questions, yes?