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Topic: Spiral
Lilypetal Joined Wed 02/25/09 Posts: 4052	Tue 05/19/09 12:53 PM
Spiraling down a forgotten path Shadows whirl in the corners I don’t want to dream it, feel it Find an excuse to turn back Words drift softly to my ears They’re like a thousand screams None I wish to hear, to feel Shelter myself in silence

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Tue 05/19/09 12:58 PM
Wonderful write...

gingin214 Joined Fri 04/17/09 Posts: 551	Tue 05/19/09 12:59 PM
You are very gifted.

Lilypetal Joined Wed 02/25/09 Posts: 4052	Tue 05/19/09 01:18 PM
Thank you MzEm!! Gingin, so kind of you to say. Thank you for reading my work.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 05/19/09 01:24 PM
Lily, your write is simplistically brilliant!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 05/19/09 01:25 PM
Silence is golden at times

Lilypetal Joined Wed 02/25/09 Posts: 4052	Tue 05/19/09 02:03 PM
Lily, your write is simplistically brilliant! AngelLight, so glad you enjoyed it...such a huge compliment coming from you.

Lilypetal Joined Wed 02/25/09 Posts: 4052	Tue 05/19/09 02:04 PM
Silence is golden at times Yes it is, LAMom

Diamond4ever Joined Tue 05/19/09 Posts: 64	Wed 05/20/09 12:10 AM
Fantastic poem. ~ the message, the nuance, the solution for shelter

Lilypetal Joined Wed 02/25/09 Posts: 4052	Wed 05/20/09 09:42 AM
Thank you Diamond!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Wed 05/20/09 09:55 AM
Nice piece

The1WhoLuvsU Joined Sun 07/20/08 Posts: 270	Wed 05/20/09 11:35 AM
I like that poem.

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