sponsored links

Community > Poems & Creative Writing

Topic: Again and Again
LexFonteyne Joined Thu 12/07/06 Posts: 32131	Fri 05/15/09 07:23 PM
You call to say Hi It's just another day In my mind I wake up with you Tangled, entwined Agility sleeps Conditions change There / Not there Invisible again Remember when you said You needed me? Never knew what that was based on But you got over it Like a girl with the flu It all goes away A week, a few pills Back to normal again And here's the saddest part -- The "p" in "pathetic" -- Every day I write pages and pages Innumerable words And the first thing I think of When I put down the pen Is to show it to you Entangled again

KimmiM Joined Sat 12/27/08 Posts: 1694	Fri 05/15/09 07:28 PM
Lex, All I can say is... get out of my head, please.

GlamorousLyly Joined Sat 11/29/08 Posts: 942	Fri 05/15/09 07:34 PM
That is really nice

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 05/15/09 09:09 PM
Great write ....I think it's hard for most people to "let go" of someone they love or have loved....not pathetic, just the human heart trying to process what is, or what may never be.

smiless Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 13765	Fri 05/15/09 10:27 PM
brilliant

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Sat 05/16/09 12:09 AM Edited by s1owhand on Sat 05/16/09 12:23 AM
1996 FORD AT9513 48" Hi Rise Sleeper; 3406E Caterpillar Engine 355 hp; 897,000 Miles; Super 10 Spd; Engine Brake; Air Ride Suspension; 3.91 Ratio; 22.5LP Tires; Budd Wheels; 196" WB; Tandem Axle; inspired 897,000 miles...

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sat 05/16/09 01:25 AM
so very nice and something many can relate to...our souls tend to heal when we are ready

Jess642 Joined Sat 03/31/07 Posts: 22732	Sat 05/16/09 01:44 AM
For 7 years he haunted my thoughts... For 4 years I was in his aura, basked in his radiance, thrived in his energy..... for 3 years I kept turning to ask his advice, to show him something, to laugh with him.....but he wasn't there... ...and then he was again....and is again... No one predicts what will, or will not be... and 897000 miles is not far...once you get there..

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Sat 05/16/09 05:19 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cGSNyBPPG_E Jewel~Again & Again

LexFonteyne Joined Thu 12/07/06 Posts: 32131	Sat 05/16/09 02:50 PM
1996 FORD AT9513 48" Hi Rise Sleeper; 3406E Caterpillar Engine 355 hp; 897,000 Miles; Super 10 Spd; Engine Brake; Air Ride Suspension; 3.91 Ratio; 22.5LP Tires; Budd Wheels; 196" WB; Tandem Axle; inspired 897,000 miles... If it gets one mile closer, it will not be able to detect my presence!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 05/19/09 09:32 AM Edited by LAMom on Tue 05/19/09 09:33 AM
Justtttttttttt perv'd your profile,, Julyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy finally,, I so love reading your work,, and can't waittttttttttttttttttttttt

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Tue 05/19/09 09:41 AM
WOW! That is some good stuff! Diggin' that!

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Tue 05/19/09 10:22 AM
Yea lex I know Every write I want him to read.... Ahhhhh

dreamboat1974 Joined Wed 05/06/09 Posts: 156	Tue 05/19/09 06:20 PM
smooth. I feel the pain

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 05/19/09 11:55 PM Edited by AngelLight on Tue 05/19/09 11:56 PM
Seamless write Deeply felt, again.

Community > Poems & Creative Writing