OK GUYS I'M NEW TO YOUR SITE SO KNOW MATTER HOW IT HURTS PLEASE RATE MY PROFILE AND PICS I WONT TO GET OFF ON THE RIGHT FOOT TO HAPPINESS

The essay needs work. It's a tough read for several reasons. First off, you have several run on sentences. Add in the missing punctuation and tighten up the grammar. You also desperately need more than one paragraph. Not many are going to read through your essay as is. You also might want to add a few more photos.

The good news is that the informational aspect of the essay is excellent.

Welcome to the site and make some friends in the forums. The forums are the best way to take advantage of a social site.

learn how to spell

Lay off the CAP'S.

The above comments are valid. I would make it a little shorter. You seem like a very nice person. Welcome to mingle.

Sometimes I might make a suggestion or two, but I never "rate" profiles. They belong to the person writing them, and other than taking suggestions or ideas to heart and making the changes,their profile is however they want it to be...misspellings, terrible grammar, weird ideas and all.

Hello and welcome to the site.

Well thank you Darling I am new at all of this but it looks they are going to wipe me into shape

Hell where's the spell ckeck lol

TO EACH HIS ON

Thank you and thanks for the welcome

There you go, jump at it with a sense of humour...although you may need to add some meds after you're here awhile.

Well thanks you sound like my kind of girl wky do some have to sweat the little stuff

Holy wall of text, Batman! Wow, that was a long sentence, oh wait...there were some periods there. Just pickin' on ya. It's a bit hard to read all in one paragraph and hardly any spaces in between the individual sentences. But what I could get out of it sounded alright. My only suggestion is to break it up some. That being said, welcome to Mingle, have fun and good luck

Well thanks EZ4 Sheezy for the welcome and I will try to do better LOL