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when she walks too close
i feel her gravity pull me into a fatal orbit we crash into one another it's something we must live with first time we met we knew no matter how far apart no matter how long the absence sometimes we go a year without so much as a simple phone call but nothing's ever simple the complication is sweet once when we intersected the rush was intensified the time went too fast and too slow we were all that mattered maybe someday we can put aside our obsticles at the same time and slow time down to a standstill and learn to burn more slowly |
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when she walks too close i feel her gravity pull me into a fatal orbit we crash into one another it's something we must live with first time we met we knew no matter how far apart no matter how long the absence sometimes we go a year without so much as a simple phone call but nothing's ever simple the complication is sweet once when we intersected the rush was intensified the time went too fast and too slow we were all that mattered maybe someday we can put aside our obsticles at the same time and slow time down to a standstill and learn to burn more slowly It's so interesting how our perception of time changes at varying intervals. Good Write. And... "the complication is sweet"....great line 
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WOW!!!
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when she walks too close i feel her gravity pull me into a fatal orbit Those fatal attractions can be hell to deal with when the person you're falling for is already in orbit with someone else. Yet that gravity keeps tugging away relentlessly. Sorry, it just reminded me of impossible pasts. 
Great write! 
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Very good writing, Dirk!!
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thank you all!
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