Topic: Now look at the mess that I'm in.
Dro_In_Indio's photo
Wed 05/06/09 10:28 AM
(This will be the last poem I ever write this way, the next one will be happy, or there will never be another one)



I am through with darkness
I'm done with the pain
I will no longer look out at a clear hot day
and see nothing but rain

My heart is switched
I wait no more
for a perfect companion
to just walk through my door

I am just a man
Imperfect in all
to expect the perfect timing
Only sets both up to fall

dillusional, unsubstantial, incomplete
Crazy my thoughts have been
the heart sometimes nievely fools itself
pretending it has seen

So I'll walk away
Always looking behind me
I'm weak like that,
I still want you to find me.

Crazy it is to even speak
Crazy to always give in
I always listen to the words of my heart
Now look at the mess that I'm in.

nvkikigirl's photo
Wed 05/06/09 10:30 AM
i like this. i equally like emotional poems of both spectrums..

great write..waving :thumbsup:

Meg8771's photo
Wed 05/06/09 10:31 AM
Aw, Dro - it is beautiful flowers

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Wed 05/06/09 10:32 AM
Very Touching..flowerforyou flowers flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Wed 05/06/09 10:32 AM
Shedding.... life is full is it not,, happy, sad and the Awe moments
of understanding,, let all that ails you go,, let the journey begin
may the road you travel bring much enlightment,,

Beautiful write flowerforyou

sexymami7979's photo
Wed 05/06/09 10:33 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou I really do like.. BEAUTIFUL flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Wed 05/06/09 10:34 AM
Nice write...and nothing wrong with putting a pen to your emotions...good or bad. Thanks for sharing thisflowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 05/06/09 12:31 PM
Hey Mr Alex, don't forget that the darkness also comes form within just as the love that brings brightness and with it we appreciate the brightness that much more.

Just cause there has been a string of dark words flowing that they will go on forever but it is good to share them as it will help you and may help another as well.


(((((ALEX)))))flowers