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Topic: Letting too much show
Dro_In_Indio Joined Mon 02/16/09 Posts: 924	Tue 05/05/09 12:02 AM
I let too much of myself show and I am going to pay for it again I don't know any way else to be Why does this world make us pay so dearly for honesty I want to switch places I want to be the one missed for a change can feeling anything be better than feeling nothing? Why does this world make the cost of feeling so high I can't be another person But I wish I was Because if I was another person I wouldn't have to work as hard as I have to I bring nothing to the table just my own corny view on what life should be like What friendship is What love is How does one know when they are actually in love? Does it really matter? Does pouring your heart out even help at all No. Love is felt or it's just not felt.

jedigirl Joined Fri 02/02/07 Posts: 1070	Tue 05/05/09 12:03 AM


catwoman96 Joined Thu 08/14/08 Posts: 5848	Tue 05/05/09 12:05 AM
dont be false advertisment...let the real u shine through always

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Tue 05/05/09 12:06 AM


AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 05/05/09 12:20 AM
I let too much of myself show and I am going to pay for it again I don't know any way else to be Why does this world make us pay so dearly for honesty I want to switch places I want to be the one missed for a change can feeling anything be better than feeling nothing? Why does this world make the cost of feeling so high I can't be another person But I wish I was Because if I was another person I wouldn't have to work as hard as I have to I bring nothing to the table just my own corny view on what life should be like What friendship is What love is How does one know when they are actually in love? Does it really matter? Does pouring your heart out even help at all No. Love is felt or it's just not felt. "Why does this world make us pay so dearly for honesty" Many people cannot be present to someone who is honest, simply because they cannot first be honestly present to themselves. "Can feeling anything be better than feeling nothing?" Absolutely! No question. Live within your humanity. Feel what you feel! "I don't know any way else to be" That tells you something. You are meant to be yourself! "I bring nothing to the table just my own corny view on what life should be like What friendship is What love is ..." Sounds to me like you bring everything to the table Excellent write Don't change who you are....

Dro_In_Indio Joined Mon 02/16/09 Posts: 924	Tue 05/05/09 12:35 AM
You all are so sweet

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Tue 05/05/09 12:35 AM
Very nice (((A)))

Dro_In_Indio Joined Mon 02/16/09 Posts: 924	Tue 05/05/09 01:07 AM
You can (((Alex))) It's OK =D

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Tue 05/05/09 02:17 AM
You can (((Alex))) It's OK =D THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!! ALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEXALEX

Dro_In_Indio Joined Mon 02/16/09 Posts: 924	Tue 05/05/09 03:01 AM
That's a lot of ME!

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Tue 05/05/09 06:58 AM
Wonderful write Live and love and learn

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 05/05/09 09:19 AM


lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 05/06/09 12:33 PM
That's a lot of ME! A lot of you is a good thing