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Topic: The rain
Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Sun 05/03/09 08:03 PM
I got lost in the world of his softness I got lost in the world of his pain I got lost in the world of his aching While walking alone in the rain Wanted to hold onto his manhood Needed to feel he's a man Wanted to bring out the sunshine To drop it right into his hand And then came the night that he left me The night he went onto that plane And I stood there just clutching his picture While walking alone in the rain Tammy

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Sun 05/03/09 08:08 PM


d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 05/04/09 06:20 AM
Nice!

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 05/04/09 08:48 AM
WOW

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 05/04/09 12:46 PM
OMG Goss How searing and completely beautiful all at the same time!

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Tue 05/05/09 02:11 AM
Did you ever have that one person who brings it all out in you? The good Bad And ugly?

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 05/05/09 09:13 AM
Beautiful,, Heartfelt,,, and painfully familiar

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Tue 05/05/09 08:02 PM
nice write here

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Tue 05/05/09 11:45 PM
Thank you to all who take the time to read

Jimmy59 Joined Thu 11/13/08 Posts: 1139	Tue 05/05/09 11:56 PM
I really enjoyed these thought and feelings. Holding on to a moment in your life that keeps you wanting to move forward in your life is a way of growing with in ones self.

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Wed 05/06/09 05:17 AM
Wanted to bring out the sunshine To drop it right into his hand love those lines! i wish it were possible to do

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