Topic: The boy next door
Gossipmpm's photo
Sun 05/03/09 04:39 PM
Sunday morning early
I watch him leave
Camoflouge and duffel bag
Mother crying tears of fear
A slap on the back from dad

In the sand he plays
In the hate he plays
With a smile he writes
Mom I am ok

Sunday morning early
I watch him come home
Camoflouge wood and the red white and blue
Mother crying tears of greif
A slap on the box by dad



Tammy


MirrorMirror's photo
Sun 05/03/09 04:43 PM

Sunday morning early
I watch him leave
Camoflouge and duffel bag
Mother crying tears of fear
A slap on the back from dad

In the sand he plays
In the hate he plays
With a smile he writes
Mom I am ok

Sunday morning early
I watch him come home
Camoflouge wood and the red white and blue
Mother crying tears of greif
A slap on the box by dad



Tammy


flowerforyou

Italy0219's photo
Sun 05/03/09 04:44 PM

Sunday morning early
I watch him leave
Camoflouge and duffel bag
Mother crying tears of fear
A slap on the back from dad

In the sand he plays
In the hate he plays
With a smile he writes
Mom I am ok

Sunday morning early
I watch him come home
Camoflouge wood and the red white and blue
Mother crying tears of greif
A slap on the box by dad



Tammy


brokenheart tears It's every mother's worst fear...I would happily give my own life for my son's..really..

tanyaann's photo
Sun 05/03/09 04:46 PM
:thumbsup: Great Write! Simple but to the point!

upstatebob's photo
Sun 05/03/09 05:29 PM
nicely done.....simple and straight

AngelLight's photo
Mon 05/04/09 01:43 PM

Sunday morning early
I watch him leave
Camoflouge and duffel bag
Mother crying tears of fear
A slap on the back from dad

In the sand he plays
In the hate he plays
With a smile he writes
Mom I am ok

Sunday morning early
I watch him come home
Camoflouge wood and the red white and blue
Mother crying tears of greif
A slap on the box by dad



Tammy





tears :cry: brokenheart ..........yes.

nvkikigirl's photo
Mon 05/04/09 01:46 PM
emotional and wonderful write.:thumbsup:

Gossipmpm's photo
Tue 05/05/09 02:06 AM
Thank you all