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Sunday morning early
I watch him leave Camoflouge and duffel bag Mother crying tears of fear A slap on the back from dad In the sand he plays In the hate he plays With a smile he writes Mom I am ok Sunday morning early I watch him come home Camoflouge wood and the red white and blue Mother crying tears of greif A slap on the box by dad Tammy |
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Sunday morning early I watch him leave Camoflouge and duffel bag Mother crying tears of fear A slap on the back from dad In the sand he plays In the hate he plays With a smile he writes Mom I am ok Sunday morning early I watch him come home Camoflouge wood and the red white and blue Mother crying tears of greif A slap on the box by dad Tammy
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Sunday morning early I watch him leave Camoflouge and duffel bag Mother crying tears of fear A slap on the back from dad In the sand he plays In the hate he plays With a smile he writes Mom I am ok Sunday morning early I watch him come home Camoflouge wood and the red white and blue Mother crying tears of greif A slap on the box by dad Tammy It's every mother's worst fear...I would happily give my own life for my son's..really..
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Great Write! Simple but to the point!
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nicely done.....simple and straight
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Sunday morning early I watch him leave Camoflouge and duffel bag Mother crying tears of fear A slap on the back from dad In the sand he plays In the hate he plays With a smile he writes Mom I am ok Sunday morning early I watch him come home Camoflouge wood and the red white and blue Mother crying tears of greif A slap on the box by dad Tammy ..........yes.
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emotional and wonderful write.
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Thank you all
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It's every mother's worst fear...I would happily give my own life for my son's..really..
Great Write! Simple but to the point!