what is wrong with my profile . you tell me i think it is ok

Your essay is a mess. It needs a total rewrite. Do not focus in on the negative and try to do something about the spelling and grammar.

Wow....if you were joking around....you could have done a much better job....Monkey trainer was funny but that is about it

If you werent - and I hope you were - here's what you need to do to fix your profile:

Round the pounds up to 130, ladies don't care about specifics when its that low. And the "when i get out of the shower" is just not appealing. We can tell you have no hair by the pictures, no need to mention it again and saying it is because "this web site"?? Do you mean because of Mingle or what? Then the millionair thing? Just say you're looking for someone "who is stable" or something. And if you dont have a car say you dont have one but we don't need to know why. And if you really are being serious and you are a fun person to hang out with...I sure hope so....and if you arent being serious and you say you're a fun person to be around I think you're lying