Topic: Questions Asked by a Fading Heart
Lilypetal's photo
Tue 04/28/09 08:48 AM
Questions Asked by a Fading Heart

Where are you?
You seem to be so far away
Standing here before me
With a smile on your face

Is it for me?
I reach for your cold hand
So slow to warm my heart
Your grip like a steal vise

Do you dream?
Are they just faded memories
You no longer wish to recall
Have they died in your reality

Who holds you?
In the middle of the night
When slumber's reminiscence rules
And the grasp on your heart loosens

Where's your soul?
Can you raise it from the grave
Buried beneath all the misery
Are you able to face yourself

Can you love?
Do you understand the depth
Of self you must give to hold me
Or the gift that I offer you




* This poem is old, just sharing some of my work.

MzEm's photo
Tue 04/28/09 09:12 AM
Thanks for sharing! I love it!

crimsonphoenix's photo
Tue 04/28/09 09:18 AM
it's great poem. flowerforyou i am sure it's about the slow loss of a loved one possibly at a hosptial. good flow and imagery. :wink:

kc0003's photo
Tue 04/28/09 09:38 AM
Nice piece

Lilypetal's photo
Tue 04/28/09 09:48 AM

Thanks for sharing! I love it!


Thank you MzEm! Always an honor to win your praise.

Lilypetal's photo
Tue 04/28/09 09:50 AM

it's great poem. flowerforyou i am sure it's about the slow loss of a loved one possibly at a hosptial. good flow and imagery. :wink:


Thanks so much for the compliments. It's about unrequited love.

Lilypetal's photo
Tue 04/28/09 09:50 AM

Nice piece


Thank you KC!

LAMom's photo
Tue 04/28/09 11:39 AM
Wonderful write,,,

flowers

Lilypetal's photo
Tue 04/28/09 02:16 PM
Edited by Lilypetal on Tue 04/28/09 02:25 PM
Thank you so much LAMom! flowerforyou

no photo
Tue 04/28/09 08:13 PM
very nice, I enjoyed itflowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Tue 04/28/09 08:15 PM
I found an old part of myself in this write~

Beautifully done.

Lilypetal's photo
Tue 04/28/09 08:29 PM
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

DTHRomeo's photo
Tue 04/28/09 08:54 PM
Man , this girl can write flowerforyou


Lilypetal's photo
Tue 04/28/09 09:01 PM

Man , this girl can write flowerforyou




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