The place where theres no pain is it on earth.
Since birth this question has always lurked.
Broken bones does it hurt when your skins rip apart.
If not life itself leaves you with pain in your heart.
Is it tears of joy or is it tears of pain.
Some people smoke weed to help them maintain.
Even in hell, when its Satan turn.
Your soul feels pain because its left to burn.
Heaven is the way, thats what the soul crave.
Or beyond the pearly gates will the soul become a slave.
As time tick away what will be your decision.
Will the soul be casted out of heaven for voicing its opionion.
Left all alone cold no home and a soul full of shi%
Cause the place where theres no pain didnt exist.

really fucking good... WILL THe last two lines rock

Makes one think

THAT POEM SUCKS !!!!! Sorry but it does!!!!

I Liked th poem myself,,,tells of a pain within,,,good work!!!

Will the soul be casted out of heaven for voicing its opionion.

No, it wont...

It's a good thought provoking element into the unknown...
don't be so judgemental dreamweaver...

reading about pain...you know nothing about it until you look at your
own guts, laying, all around you and by luck you ''recover''...but NOT
REALLY...THAT is pain...you trip along, in life pain is 24/7//////ooooo
nevermind...no one gives a crap....your loving dad picks you up...you
are a new born baby, in his loving arms...he tosses your body around
like an unwanted rag doll...THAT IS PAIN, my dear...the baby's body is
left cripled for life...blood dried up... but...the babies brain is a
zombie....fried more than any drugs can do....one day, the babies brain
wakes up...a wimper...a cry...a sigh....baby's mind, SNAPS....O
NO....Dad is dead!!!!!

dreamweaver
your pain is obvious, but do not assume no one else can FEEL it
we each have our own demons to fight in our own way
in our own might in our own time the only way we know how...
whatever it is you are dealing with, you really dont have to go it
alone...