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Topic: Satisfaction
nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Sat 04/25/09 03:45 PM Edited by nvkikigirl on Sat 04/25/09 04:38 PM
Selfish Not satisfied I had waited Longed Searched for this moment Built Erected a fantasy That was sorely destroyed. Left wanting Still wanting Still waiting For my true prince to come. Explosions unreal One can never tell Feeling nothing Seeing it clearly My blood runs deeper Matches my needs And I wait My fantasy built Erected Re-created Still waiting Still wanting Left eager Disappointed Unsatisfied And I can only apologize to myself. copyright. Kim P. 04/24/09

MichaelATL44 Joined Wed 05/14/08 Posts: 178	Sat 04/25/09 04:04 PM
That's deep. Thanks.

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Sat 04/25/09 04:11 PM
That's deep. Thanks.

MrHerrNudist Joined Sat 01/03/09 Posts: 154	Sat 04/25/09 04:30 PM
Love the signature!! Gives me a whole new fantasy!! ... the witing is very thought provoking as well...

TJokerzWild Joined Tue 05/08/07 Posts: 880	Sat 04/25/09 04:31 PM
Very nice

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Sat 04/25/09 04:41 PM
Love the signature!! Gives me a whole new fantasy!! ... the witing is very thought provoking as well... Thanks! I changed it.. LOL, I don't know where the copyright symbol is. LOL And thanks for reading, too!!

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Sat 04/25/09 04:43 PM
Very nice

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nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Sat 04/25/09 05:33 PM


MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sat 04/25/09 05:37 PM
Selfish Not satisfied I had waited Longed Searched for this moment Built Erected a fantasy That was sorely destroyed. Left wanting Still wanting Still waiting For my true prince to come. Explosions unreal One can never tell Feeling nothing Seeing it clearly My blood runs deeper Matches my needs And I wait My fantasy built Erected Re-created Still waiting Still wanting Left eager Disappointed Unsatisfied And I can only apologize to myself. copyright. Kim P. 04/24/09

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Sat 04/25/09 05:48 PM


nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Sat 04/25/09 05:50 PM
Selfish Not satisfied I had waited Longed Searched for this moment Built Erected a fantasy That was sorely destroyed. Left wanting Still wanting Still waiting For my true prince to come. Explosions unreal One can never tell Feeling nothing Seeing it clearly My blood runs deeper Matches my needs And I wait My fantasy built Erected Re-created Still waiting Still wanting Left eager Disappointed Unsatisfied And I can only apologize to myself. copyright. Kim P. 04/24/09

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Sat 04/25/09 05:51 PM


d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Sat 04/25/09 05:53 PM
Nicely Done

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Sat 04/25/09 06:09 PM
Nicely Done Thank you!!!

DTHRomeo Joined Wed 06/20/07 Posts: 43387	Sat 04/25/09 06:16 PM


nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Sat 04/25/09 07:26 PM


upstatebob Joined Fri 11/21/08 Posts: 45	Fri 05/01/09 12:16 PM
WOW.......deep...i like it

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Fri 05/01/09 01:51 PM
I like that...

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Fri 05/01/09 03:27 PM
upstatebob: thank you, that is so kind, your poems are great. MzEm: thank you so much, you are such a wonderful poet. I appreciate every other poet and lover of words...you all are so welcoming and kind.