I just want creative criticism... So, feel free to comment about my profile.

Kinda of negative.
Not meeting anybody
If you, etc. etc. etc. I can't be around you.

Lighten it up, be positive in what you are looking for in a woman.

Ummmm

Ditto

Yup sounds negative

I kind of figure that... I guess I must change it a little bit.

Its OK to look at other guys profiles to get an idea too. It won't show up on 'Who viewed my profile'

Ok, I changed it a little bit. Hopefully, it sounds more positive.

Well u say share similar interest. You could tell people what your interest are. JMO

Think about this for a moment K.Ask yourself how creative is the question"Does my profile suck?"There is neg.vibes just oozing out of that question.Work on it!(imo)G'Luck!

Hi

Your profile contains nothing to inspire interest. Out of thousands of profiles on Mingle, what about yours will motivate a girl to contact you? Think about that as you are writing your introduction.

What type of girl are you interested in meeting? You say you wish to meet someone with similar interests but you haven't listed ANY of your own!

You need a few pix with a smile. You don't look like a happy person. Happy begets happy. If you don't look happy or fun then you will you will attract not so happy and not so fun. Then again, be yourself! If you don't smile then I guess leave those pix. You might not get any views though.

Enjoy the site and dating! We get one chance at life -- do it right the first time!

Thanks for the creative criticism. It does help...

Well, apparently you took Melody's advice cause I don't see too much wrong with it. She does offer great critiques.

You want 'creative' criticism? Mine would be to offer some 'constructive criticism' (the proper term, but don't listen to me I'm just a smartass) to tell you to construct a bit more creativity in your profile - just a little something to the tune of what sets you apart from the rest.

As it is now, it's just kinda generic. So yeah, just include something to appeal to women looking for something special, or a special type of woman you are seeking. You got decent pics and I think with some elaboration on what's on your insides, you'd have some good luck.

Happy hunting!

Ok buddy,

Are you trying to intice a dead woman or a live one. Write down the true you. Write it from the heart. We can see all the other stuff on the profile and for you to repeat it makes it more drab. Express your wants and needs. Communication is the best of all relationships. Think from the heart and express from your soul.

Ravendancer

Much better now than before.

Where in the world is Carmen Santiago?