Hi

Do you have any pix of you with a smile? Your main is not very friendly.

Since your main is the first representation of you.

Try something that SHOUTS: I'm happy and I want a happy person in my life too.

Your profile has nothing to inspire interest.

How can a girl decide to contact you if there is nothing there to pique her curiosity?

Many wouldn't open your profile because of the main pic.

Those that do, may click the next one because your profile is blah.

I don't mean to sound harsh but you asked for feedback.

Profiles are for marketing yourself! There are thousands of profiles on the site.

How will stand apart from the rest?