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to have a good profile. any pointers or opinions are appreciated
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Best advice is the advice I just got ---- post pictures where they can see your face and be "straight up with what you're looking for" in your "profile"....Like "close ups" I guess? I dunno I'm still working on it myself
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Take your kid off and talk about you.
Read other profiles, 'cus IMO yours needs a wicked lot of work. You look pissed off in your pic and a shot without a hat is really needed. |
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to have a good profile. any pointers or opinions are appreciated |
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Edited by
Larry1983
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Fri 04/03/09 11:34 AM
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ok, added a few more pictures. took off my daughter(i thought i should be upfront about having a child). im a basic person, not good with details so much so what should i say about myself...forgive me for being a male
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ok, added a few more pictures. took off my daughter(i thought i should be upfront about having a child). im a basic person, not good with details so much so what should i say about myself...forgive me for being a male |
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There is a section to check off if you have kids. Dating is about YOU. What do you want to know about someone else? write that info in about yourself. It's not rocket science. Trust me, you guys make it hard.
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ok i added more info, but you have a lot lilith, im not so creative so i hope this is up to par
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Edited by
singmesweet
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Fri 04/03/09 12:14 PM
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You say you've been separated for 8 months, but then you have "never married" checked. Which is it?
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i never been married, separated from the mother of my daughter. you could say broke up but it was almost marriage.
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ok i added more info, but you have a lot lilith, im not so creative so i hope this is up to par It's not about creativity. It's about being me and articulating that. Expressing my personality.... |
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Maybe leave that part out. It sounds a bit confusing.
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Oh my .... you added more but I don't have anything nice to say about it.
Good luck. I also realized you don't have a hat on... not sure why I thought you did. Sorry about that. But you do look so pissed off you're going beat the crap out of someone. |
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ok, i will remove that part. ty
still nothing nice huh....you new englanders are a tough crowd i thought you were talking about the other guy i dont know why but i have always looked like that i have 1 or 2 with a smile but not sure if i want those to be seen |
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Read what you wrote out loud.
Imagine you are reading it about someone else... what does it convey? |
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i dont have any wow factor, simple and basic
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I have a 1 1/2 year old daughter, her name is Rosalynn. Been single for about 8 months and decided its time to put myself back out there.
You left the relationship while the child was young. TMI for profiles.... It would honestly keep most women from talking... at least me. I'm looking for more of a friendship in the beginning, I'm not sure I'm ready to get real serious real fast.
I am not at all sure what I want. I might have sex with you though, but I might cut and run at any time.... I have a job, i work 3rd shift. im a mamas boy you could say, but not as bad as some guys. i like to eat, my favorite food is b-b-q ribs. i could eat it 7 times a week if possible.
I will chose my mother over you, if she doesn't like you I will dump you, I expect you to take care of me. i believe in karma, so i try to be as good a person as i can daily. i also believe that behind every good man is a great woman. its hard at least for me to live up to my potential with out one. i am i am average by myself, but with her i can be great.
I need a woman to make me feel whole, as I'm broken without a relationship. Fact is, I'm sort of lazy without a controlling strong woman (like my mother) to tell me what to do and when to do it. I don't have the motivation to be as good without someone to impress. Anything else you would like to know just ask.
I'm too lazy to write anything more. |
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This is just what I read....
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damn, maybe i should stick to a blank page
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damn, maybe i should stick to a blank page No, what you need to do is think carefully and write for the reader. I'm betting I'm not too far off on a lot of this. Don't worry, it's my job.... |
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