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Topic: Sometimes I do miss you....
Jimmy59 Joined Thu 11/13/08 Posts: 1139	Thu 04/02/09 11:11 PM
Standing on the edge of a cliff With my arms wide open Breeze swirls all around me And I feel her serene presence A wind carrying her aroma Rests on my elegant skin As the night proceed further Tear erupts and my heart wither Leaning on a wilted maple tree Tracing her name with my fingers I try to console my broken heart But still in my mind her memory lingers Dedicated to my dear departed love... Love you forever

msdestinbooty Joined Wed 03/12/08 Posts: 1915	Thu 04/02/09 11:15 PM
That is really good

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Thu 04/02/09 11:15 PM
Beautiful poem!

Jimmy59 Joined Thu 11/13/08 Posts: 1139	Thu 04/02/09 11:16 PM
That is really good Thank you you are oh so kind.

Jimmy59 Joined Thu 11/13/08 Posts: 1139	Thu 04/02/09 11:18 PM
Beautiful poem! Thanks your thoughts are helpful in so many ways.

msdestinbooty Joined Wed 03/12/08 Posts: 1915	Fri 04/03/09 12:27 AM
That is really good Thank you you are oh so kind. Your are welcome

DTHRomeo Joined Wed 06/20/07 Posts: 43387	Fri 04/03/09 12:39 AM
nice

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