Hi all just wanted to see what others thought about my profile? I am open for suggestions.

Thanks

Dreamy

Looks good

Just needs more pics

I LIKE IT AND I'M GOIN TO A ****ED UP DIVORCE TOO I'M MOVING TOO SOON TO TENNESSEE IS NICE TO START OVER AND GET A NEW LIFE I HOPE U HAVE LUCK I'M TRYING TO TO MOVE ON TOO .IT SUCKZ THAT U HAVE TO START WITH BABYSTEPS I WISH I WAS THE SAME B4 I MET THAT JACKASS

More pix, Dude. The ladies love to window shop.

Paso Robles, huh? Oak Pass.. Been there, done that.. Up the road from Big Sur, and Carmel.. Spent a month there one weekend.

I going to try and upload some more pics, still getting settled in with the move and all. Pretty much just dug this one up, of course not the best 'vogue' pose LOL

HI!

I would recrop the pic you have -- to focus on your upper body -- so your face is visible on the thumbnail (and not your legs).

I won't click on a profile if their face is out of the pic.

Adding more pix, with close ups, and using one of those as a main pic is a better idea.

I think you have the general idea, but take out the second paragraph that outlines 'no game players', blah, blah, blah.

People aren't 'fake'. Fake implies being a robot or something. People are not sincere, or not genuine, but the 'fake' line is a turn off for most people. Everyone says it but it has no meaning.

Seriously, that is too ambiguous to have a meaning! That is not the positive way to highlight who you are looking for in a partner. Not to mention, it's a very stale and non creative way to 'fill' space.

Do you like tomboys or prissy girls? Do you like adventurous or stay-at-home girls? What do you like to do on dates? Focus on this type of approach.

It's good you stayed away from bashing past relationship but drop the 'going through a divorce' line. That is drama and too much information for a dating site! Share that with someone after you get to know them.

Me personally? I shudder at the comment you made about "settling down". Good for you if that is where you are headed but not all girls want to settle down and get old!

Market yourself! Emphasize your best qualities and attract the type of lady that makes you hot -- and that keeps your attention!

Thanks for the input Melody after seeing what I wrote I pretty much did a complete redo LOL


Cheers!

Holy crap! That is awesome, and I love the new main pic!

Yeah it took some digging for some pics haha I finally found my new main pic on my backup photobucket account. And thanks for the props!