As the sun slides down
Into it's dark blue realm
I wake and find myself
Sitting at my own helm

Navigating my way ahead
Through rough waters I go
The darkness hides danger
I could never know

Waves crash upon the deck
Wind blows and I capsize
Drowning in this black abyss
I finally open my eyes

This ocean of black
Has taken me down
Everything is dark
My chest, it pounds

As The wind dies away
The waves cease to roll
I gather all my senses
Grasping on to control

As I pull myself out
Of this deafening sea
I begin to breathe again
I can finally see

This ocean we call life
Can turn us all around
With a consuming wave
Or a silent sound

Gather your strength
Hold on tight as hell
We can overcome it all
Look around... can't you tell?

Good stuff, I love the metaphors.
A+++

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Awesome work

all i can say is wow!!!! that was deep somtimes it pounds my chest too...

Thanks