See, there's two of your great qualities shining through - happy and helpful!

Thank you. You are a very sweet man.

Seems a tad defensive IMO. Just lines like "I don't take any BS" (does anyone ever write I'm willing to take all kinds of crap from people?) And "only the truly brave need to apply". It just doesn't feel welcoming. I also think the smiles in the other pictures seem more natural and thus more attractive. Perhaps have someone take a picture of you while you're doing something you enjoy (like in the other pics).

It may just be me, but I prefer the non cookie cutter profile. When you see a lot of profiles the ones that just list activities you enjoy gets a bit dry. I think writing profiles is tough but people should try to inject their personality into it. Anywho good luck.

It is excellent.

thank you

You're welcome.