Topic: I am a fish
afro's photo
Fri 03/27/09 12:05 AM
I am a fish—a fish at heart.
And did I mention I was smart?
What’s that I see?
I have some company behind me.
A shark with sharpest teeth and determination.
Full she is of anticipation of a healthy ration.
Shall I oblige this shark such dinner
And make her think she is some winner?
Oh that can not be
For I shall always be free.
I must now swim quite fast
Until the danger is past.
Bye now proud shark.
You shall never hit your mark.

no photo
Fri 03/27/09 11:15 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou thanks for posting and welcome to Mingle2

MirrorMirror's photo
Fri 03/27/09 11:18 AM

I am a fish—a fish at heart.
And did I mention I was smart?
What’s that I see?
I have some company behind me.
A shark with sharpest teeth and determination.
Full she is of anticipation of a healthy ration.
Shall I oblige this shark such dinner
And make her think she is some winner?
Oh that can not be
For I shall always be free.
I must now swim quite fast
Until the danger is past.
Bye now proud shark.
You shall never hit your mark.

flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Fri 03/27/09 03:02 PM
Cool Write! bigsmile Kinda corny. But I love corny. Especially when it's crafted into something well written as this. Good job.




AngelLight's photo
Fri 03/27/09 03:05 PM
This write makes me smile ~ Ty and nice job.

Welcome too flowerforyou

mendy2's photo
Sat 03/28/09 08:08 PM
thank you,, i love the poerty and I like to go fishing too

d4tc's photo
Sun 03/29/09 03:51 AM
This poem inspired my latest write "Hoarse Chatter"






s1owhand's photo
Sun 03/29/09 04:05 AM

flowerforyou flowerforyou thanks for posting and welcome to Mingle2


what she says!