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I woke up with the poem in my head and quickly wrote it down- would be awesome to find a picture to go with it and put it on my wall!
On A darkless Night I peered into the shy. When suddenly I saw a shimmering light My heart could not deny. It's gleaming streams of rays touched tear drops falling down, Then gently wiped away the hurt from which my heart was bound. I shivered as I let go of dreams of you, then mended back my broken heart that once was torn in two. |
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Thats very beautiful Thank you
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I woke up with the poem in my head and quickly wrote it down- would be awesome to find a picture to go with it and put it on my wall! On A darkless Night I peered into the shy. When suddenly I saw a shimmering light My heart could not deny. It's gleaming streams of rays touched tear drops falling down, Then gently wiped away the hurt from which my heart was bound. I shivered as I let go of dreams of you, then mended back my broken heart that once was torn in two. |
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er- I have been reading this over and over again and Now I think it makes no sense at all!
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er- I have been reading this over and over again and Now I think it makes no sense at all! Destin, that's not true. It makes perfect sense and in fact your write is quite beautiful, especially here.... "It's gleaming streams of rays touched tear drops falling down, Then gently wiped away the hurt from which my heart was bound." And, the very ending is all about healing! It makes complete sense...moving from to this |
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