Topic: Mended Heart
Destin2gocrazy's photo
Thu 03/26/09 01:14 PM
I woke up with the poem in my head and quickly wrote it down- would be awesome to find a picture to go with it and put it on my wall!

On A darkless Night
I peered into the shy.
When suddenly I saw a shimmering light
My heart could not deny.
It's gleaming streams of rays touched
tear drops falling down,
Then gently wiped away the hurt from
which my heart was bound.
I shivered as I let go
of dreams of you,
then mended back
my broken heart
that once was torn in two.

sweetnsassyntall's photo
Thu 03/26/09 01:37 PM
Thats very beautiful Thank you flowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Thu 03/26/09 01:40 PM

I woke up with the poem in my head and quickly wrote it down- would be awesome to find a picture to go with it and put it on my wall!

On A darkless Night
I peered into the shy.
When suddenly I saw a shimmering light
My heart could not deny.
It's gleaming streams of rays touched
tear drops falling down,
Then gently wiped away the hurt from
which my heart was bound.
I shivered as I let go
of dreams of you,
then mended back
my broken heart
that once was torn in two.

flowerforyou

Destin2gocrazy's photo
Thu 03/26/09 01:44 PM
er- I have been reading this over and over again and Now I think it makes no sense at all!frustrated noway

AngelLight's photo
Thu 03/26/09 02:34 PM

er- I have been reading this over and over again and Now I think it makes no sense at all!frustrated noway




Destin, that's not true. It makes perfect sense and in fact your write is quite beautiful, especially here....

"It's gleaming streams of rays touched
tear drops falling down,
Then gently wiped away the hurt from
which my heart was bound."

And, the very ending is all about healing! It makes complete sense...moving from brokenheart to this :heart: