Okay my profile is pretty simple and to the point but I feel like I need to maybe be more specific? Loosen up? I'm not great at writing these and some of you have very well written profiles. What are the things I could improve on mine? I'm open to everything cause I haven't ever been really good at talking about myself anyway. Help?

I think what you have sounds good and to the point.

Just open up to your reAl self and let it flow through to your profile. Your a cutie though!

Thank you

I know sites like these we always look first at who the person is THEN the words that are written follow but I think I'm trying to achieve the impossible lol... I want to have someone want to talk to me not based on how I look but who I am..... I'm looking for the Holy Grail with that one I think

looks good, kupo!

Nice profile and may I say you don't look your age!!!

Add a few more pics and have fun.

I think you did great, you'll have your phone ringing off the hook in no time!!!!

If you're trying to find someone who likes you for your personality you need to try a bit harder to shove your personality into your profile. Go read other people's profiles find a few you just find interesting, different, fun to read. I think that if you have a well written profile a friend should be able to read it without knowing who it is and just be able to tell it's you.

I think too many people say I am this or I am that. I am down to earth, I am funny etc etc. If you can show it rather than outright say it, it leaves a better impression.

nice