Topic: Same Guy - different poem - infatuation bites
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Sun 03/22/09 11:38 AM
Edited by DizzyLizzy123 on Sun 03/22/09 11:39 AM
The Carousel

Souls spin - an eliptical dance - balance eludes.
Hopes shrink and expand in irridescent bursts on a blurred reality.
Incandescent vision - you shine through...
dominant, deliberate, daring.
Darling,
whisk me away - I only want to play
with you,
in you,
on you.
My face incognito - still as stone - but my souls spin,
round and round,
arms out,
head back,
eyes closed,
round and round,
whisk me away - I only want to play.

MirrorMirror's photo
Sun 03/22/09 11:57 AM

The Carousel

Souls spin - an eliptical dance - balance eludes.
Hopes shrink and expand in irridescent bursts on a blurred reality.
Incandescent vision - you shine through...
dominant, deliberate, daring.
Darling,
whisk me away - I only want to play
with you,
in you,
on you.
My face incognito - still as stone - but my souls spin,
round and round,
arms out,
head back,
eyes closed,
round and round,
whisk me away - I only want to play.

flowerforyou

puggirl7's photo
Sun 03/22/09 12:35 PM
good write! flowerforyou